Tried to get fancy with those last two panels; not sure it reads as easily as I'd hoped it would.
Lemuel's channelling himself some Legolas here. Making up for a fight with an enemy vliegeng that I had to cut.
2019-10-16 03:50:22 +0000 UTC View Post
Dhampir's just gonna bounce for now, don't mind her.
Two character things I really like on this page: Duane and Lemuel do not for one second question going after Will. Of course they're going to go after Will, even if they die trying to save him. There is not a moment of hesitation because they are both at heart decent ...
2019-10-11 04:08:19 +0000 UTC View Post
Everyone who remembered little Will from chapter 7 has been waiting for the other arm I mean shoe to drop. And there it goes, with a sick thud.
Didn't Vampire say the salt lizard didn't immediately kill you though? She salts you! Maybe they can get Will out! Go go go!
2019-10-09 03:53:09 +0000 UTC View Post
Shaensigin pragmatically gobbling down Vampire on her way outta Dodge is emblematic of senet beasts v humans, to me. Maybe to humans he was a powerful rebel and leader of men, impossibly old, cut down in a humiliating manner tragically unbefitting his long and dramatic life. To Shaensigin he's a snack.
Anyway, go Lemon ...
2019-10-07 03:52:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Four new pages today. I just couldn't bring myself to stagger this any further.
Many assume the Etalarche curse inspires only physical responses. It makes someone want to kill you. But it actually makes it more important that they hurt you. And we all know words hurt much more than swords.
The question we...
2019-09-30 03:52:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Two pages today! Bit of mayhem!
This is all supposed to be happening so fast that I really hate staggering the pages. Threatens to make everyone look too slow to react. Pretend it's happening really fast! :)
2019-09-27 03:45:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Page Triple Digit! You know I originally intended for this chapter to be about 75 pages, all in sepia-toned sketch, and a nice holiday from the otherwise tedious artwork Unsounded requires? Oh ho ho ho.
I'm contemplating a page dump next week but it's hard to decide where to end it. We have about fifteen pages of solid ...
2019-09-25 03:45:01 +0000 UTC View Post
I like the Salt Lizard's little dig on Roger here. "You had a great time playing the troll and making Alderode hate you. But if you want victory, you'll have to trade away everything you are - and you won't get to enjoy the prize."
Roger doesn't seem too keen on that, understandably. It's one thing to die unintended in ...
2019-09-23 03:57:57 +0000 UTC View Post
A, so that's why the cute science girl came along. To ask the important questions. I like Roger's expression in the last panel. He honestly knows next to nothing about pymary.
Shaensigin is speaking pretty plainly on this page. If you think you know who the individuals are she is talking about, you're probably cor...
2019-09-20 03:56:06 +0000 UTC View Post
Duane was listening to this conversation pretty closely fifteen years ago yet had no bloody idea what this crazy monster was blathering about. Remembering it now however... she does paint a vivid picture of this "Betrayer Bird." Sounds kind of familiar.
Anyway, this page is a regular Manhattan Project of dropped bombs -...
2019-09-18 03:53:50 +0000 UTC View Post
Shaensigin has called this old ogre heart home for a few decades now, hence the salt crystals that have sprung up everywhere and the odd (floating because of the khert-fire) skull or two. It's cosy enough, low rent, though her landlord did go and vanish for ten years.
I really like the last panel of her smile cracking s...
2019-09-16 03:57:05 +0000 UTC View Post
Vampire's dialogue is enjoyable to write but at the same time, deeply embarrassing. I worry about people seeing these pages on their own, out of context, and concluding I am a hack. Which is true, but I am a hack in entirely different ways.
Anyway, Mallory acting super sketch here.
2019-09-13 03:57:44 +0000 UTC View Post
I like this page. Roger is almost skirting the "villain" line - and maybe he completely crosses it for you since we don't have a lot to go on to justify any of this but him and Vampire babbling about Alderode denying them freedom. We don't know what Lord and Lady Foi-Hellick were like. Maybe they were great!
My favourit...
2019-09-11 04:07:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Pretty meaty page, though a lot of it is between the lines. Roger didn't want to marry a woman and his family made sure he suffered for it. I think we can presume his parents had a lot invested in him. I think we can also gather that even the rich and privileged in Alderode are expected to conform to society.
What the h...
2019-09-09 04:02:32 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's where Duane first hears the Salt Lizard's name, a name which very few humans know. Revealing it to her was really the only reason Ruffles' Nanna let him start spinning this tale at all which, for all she knows, could be some sinister spiderpaw fabrication designed to trick her.
Anyway, the two-toes are super happ...
2019-09-06 04:00:13 +0000 UTC View Post
I'd really like to explore a giant petrified heart.
Why do you reckon Vampire is sending his troops away? He must have a lot of trust in Queen Sonorie to be alone with just Roger and her people. Either that, or he doesn't have any other option, for some reason.
Anyway, his Plat wright Eustace seems salty.
2019-09-04 03:54:39 +0000 UTC View Post
If you've been keen on trying to work out just what Queen Sonorie is up to. this page drops some not-so-subtle clues.
I didn't want to name Miss Young and Cute Researcher here - it felt like dropping too many new proper nouns in too short a span of time. I also like how she recognises her own expendability and can only ...
2019-09-02 03:57:18 +0000 UTC View Post
Dhampir is a dick, but Duane is a hypocrite, and everyone is terrible!
2019-08-30 03:55:15 +0000 UTC View Post
I was tempted to do a twofer - the next page is really meaty - but arrgh, Fridays are bad days to skip.
Dhampir there you may remember from the beginning of the chapter - she's the one who put her sword through Lemuel's friend. I like her a lot and cutting out pretty much her entire backstory was painful. Ultim...
2019-08-28 03:58:02 +0000 UTC View Post
I like how Vampire talks. It's old-timey, goofy, and a little endearing to me. How seriously can you take anyone who calls dudes "knaves?" Pack it up, Beardo.
Anyway, it was a fun excuse to research lots of archaic words. Not only archaic words but ways in which extant words were once used differently. I tried to keep h...
2019-08-26 04:02:21 +0000 UTC View Post
This is the start of a series of scenes where there were just too damn many characters to draw. It gets worse when Shaensigin re-enters in a few pages. She takes so very long not only to draw but to colour. There are ways to suggest all the detail of her scales without slogging through drawing and shading them all, b...
2019-08-23 03:52:46 +0000 UTC View Post
See, Will knew what he was doing. Just wanted to season his nasty goat jerky.
Shaensigin here is a very troubled creature and has not had a very pleasant existence the past few centuries. Let's hope she doesn't take it out on our boys.
The Salt Lizard's been in my head a long time. I've reams of lore conc...
2019-08-21 03:54:03 +0000 UTC View Post
This is one of my favourite Lemuel pages. He expresses who he is and what drives him in fairly stark terms. Yes, he has an inferiority complex when it comes to Duane but he's also fiercely proud of his own small achievements, and he's not going to fall into the stupid traps that Duane lays for himself. Reality sucks! But Lem ...
2019-08-19 04:01:22 +0000 UTC View Post
This is Duane and Lemuel's first moment alone since their talk the night before in the chapel, and in spite of all that's happened since then that chat's been in the back of Lem's head. Notice he immediately brings it up when he feels Duane looking at him? But... only because he's been uneasy over how he let his guard down an...
2019-08-16 03:55:23 +0000 UTC View Post
To make Duane feel better and distract him from Jon's death Lemuel decides to tell everyone that he left school because of a socially unacceptable coat closet liaison with a girl who saved him from bullies, and after she claimed his virginity he bitterly wept~
And it worked! Now he's just real pissed off.
Duane do...
2019-08-14 03:56:22 +0000 UTC View Post
Lemuel sees a lot of himself in Will, particularly after Duane told him earlier that night the rumour that Will was put into this Company by his own dad. Lemuel and Will remain close all their lives, with a lot of shared experiences only the other one can truly understand, and a mutual love of poor Duane.
2019-08-12 03:57:18 +0000 UTC View Post
When the zombie apocalypse comes and I can't help fight off the undead hordes because I chose to invest all my experience points in making comics, I will use Evans' line to defend my decision.
2019-08-09 03:47:21 +0000 UTC View Post
I've always found opossums amazing for their skill at going from adorable to NOPE in basically three seconds flat. They're just fluffy trash babies until you give them a reason to curl their lips away from their fangs. Basically indistinguishable from Sette.
2019-08-07 03:55:16 +0000 UTC View Post
