Heavenly Bodies, Page 33
Added 2022-06-26 18:24:09 +0000 UTC
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I second the varied body comments whether it's more petite but still athletic middle weights, the big beefy girls being relegated to the bruiserweight division and even a sexy plus size model body type super heavyweight division, HOWEVER AF Combat is a master storyteller and the different types of story scenarios he weaves foxy boxing into is just phenomenally creative. So I can live if the girls have basically one body type. What I personally always have mentioned in the past was an increase in the number of occasional peripheral male characters, whether it's some fighters having corner men instead of corner women, sleazy male promoters running the some of the shows and some fighters instead of 100% of them being lesbians, some of them having boyfriends or husbands (whether they don't like their girl foxy boxing or are the good supportive guy), but again, these stories are so damn well written and the action scenes are so damn good, I can live with it not being 100% the way I'd do it. In my opinion, AF Combat is a genius. Kudos to AF Combat.
Spiros Bozikis
2022-06-26 20:26:03 +0000 UTCalso, i hope sonya shows up for gator's match with maureen. just sayin'.
labeltornoff
2022-06-26 20:25:56 +0000 UTCi, for one, like your characters. but ... what i like more and more is your ability to handle multiple side stories within the main theme. this page is a good example of a seamless transition from one side story to another. (note: side story is my term. others may have a different name, but i do not mean 'side' as in 'less than.') keep going. i begin to think this may be your best story yet.
labeltornoff
2022-06-26 20:23:47 +0000 UTC
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