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The Sixth School. Chapter 078.

Hi guys,

Here is Chapter Seventy Eight.

As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.

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Comments

The Morpheus/ teir zero element is really interesting. Here's this super powerful tool to help Greg transcend the 9 teirs, but could also kill him if overutilized. And then the divinity fragment comes into play at some point, who knows what kind of crazy shit that will precipitate. Good stuff!

Jonathan Depenau

A little sad to see the trust between Greg and Olivia seemingly start to erode, although I can see how it’s good character development given how they started. It provides a contrast to Greg and Morpheus relationship, where they started in a somewhat antagonistic state, have come to a mutually beneficial agreement, and over time will build a relationship of trust through shared overcome obstacles. Olivia started at the other end of the spectrum, with being a bound familiar. Olivia and the system are pretty much the defining characteristics of Greg’s character though, and nowhere near fully explored. The achievement system, alternative dungeons, and remaining advanced purchases haven’t been touched on since the start of the story. The RPG mechanics you have introduced are a big draw for me personally, and are somewhat unique to this story, so I really hope to see them continue to be explored!

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