Enhanced Inc 4-5
Added 2019-01-13 19:33:38 +0000 UTCA couple days later we see Ms. Nielson in her day job...
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I know! That's why I love it! There weren't many mistakes anyway, so it wouldn't be hard to correct if it weren't part of the image. The meaning of what the boss says isn't clear because someone who is impressionable is easily impressed, and someone who is impressive makes an impression. Good luck!
Puppet Master
2019-01-15 00:36:10 +0000 UTCThank you Todd! Writing is not my strong suit here! Haha, spelling mistakes are things I will fix but as long as the sentence make sense, that's all I care about! My comics are meant to be silly and off the cuff not serious literature. Please forgive my shortcomings. I appreciate it :)
Slooty Slots
2019-01-14 22:17:47 +0000 UTCI'm loving the new story, but there's some spelling and grammar errors in image 4. It should be: "this year's business convention and", not this years buisness convention. And; "you're an excellent employee, but I need to make a good impression", not your an excellent employeee but, I need to send a good impression; "She is younger and sexier...er, I mean impressive than you", not She is a younger, and much more sexy-err, I mean impressionable than you. Hope that helps. (Of course, the boss might not know the meaning of the word impressionable.)
Puppet Master
2019-01-14 06:15:56 +0000 UTC
