Good Girls Dont Bite! One Shot Page 17
Added 2020-08-02 00:30:16 +0000 UTCPatreon has been slow today xd
Took me a while to upload this file.
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I would, not to tell you how to tell your story, but I would find a way to work that into the plot, maybe in a later page after Scarlet finds out, "Why didn't you just not have me over?!" "Deadlines..."
DogGirlKari
2020-08-02 04:05:06 +0000 UTCAh! Thats something I had to cut for time, but Maya did try to change dates but the project was due a certain date so they had to work on it as soon as possible. The usual projects they give zero time for that everybody loves :D
PerfectDuwang
2020-08-02 03:41:06 +0000 UTCI mean, not to question her rules... but wouldn't it be easier to just... not to the project on the nights she will transform?
DogGirlKari
2020-08-02 03:33:33 +0000 UTCThe curse so nice she did it thrice.
Symmetrymaster
2020-08-02 02:21:04 +0000 UTCYou are doing good dood, don't worry.
Hexen
2020-08-02 01:04:09 +0000 UTCTake as long as you need. I'm enjoying the drama.
Jennifer Miller
2020-08-02 00:55:49 +0000 UTCNo no no, it's perfect. I'm just ancy.
Jennifer Miller
2020-08-02 00:51:19 +0000 UTCOh? is it dragging on too long? Because of the page limit I rushed the pacing but It seems it still drags on xD
PerfectDuwang
2020-08-02 00:50:27 +0000 UTCMy only issue with narratives. It takes forever to get to the meat.
Jennifer Miller
2020-08-02 00:44:11 +0000 UTCBacon is in favour of more awoo
Baconhands
2020-08-02 00:37:15 +0000 UTCFor this story, my werewolves transform the day of the full moon, as well as the day before and after it. Meaning, they transform 3 times a month :o
PerfectDuwang
2020-08-02 00:34:54 +0000 UTCWill she only be transforming on full moons?
Baconhands
2020-08-02 00:32:14 +0000 UTC
