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AMSL Ch: 13
To most kids—to most ten-year-olds—five weeks felt like an eternity. Five weeks was enough time to meet somebody and become best friends with them.
It was also possible for the opposite to happen, but children weren’t known for holding onto grudges…. Right?
“Hey, Harry, is it just me, or does your cousin...
2025-05-31 08:16:04 +0000 UTC View PostCh: 10 Rewrite
Dwarfs were real—I meant Stone Kin. Shoot, that sounded bad even in my head; I was going to need to change how I referred to them fast.
It sucked because I was conditioned to call them that, thanks to all the fiction from my previous life, but at least my Tolkien fantasies were alive again, even if I could never use t...
2025-04-25 06:39:56 +0000 UTC View PostCh: 9 Rewrite and Response to the Poll
Darrius' Point of View:
Silvia and I lie silently next to one another, neither of us being able to fall asleep. We were both waiting for the other to bring up what happened during dinner, but there was only silence between us.
Leaning over, I wrap my arm around my wife and pull her in close. I fee...
2025-03-12 04:34:11 +0000 UTC View PostPlease Read, Important
Sorry for the silence; I've been struggling to write the next chapter and started to spiral a bit. However, instead of falling into that trap again, I'm reaching out to you, my readers, for help.
First, I'm going to do my best to explain my problem, and I'd very much appreciate your thoughts on the matter.
Now th...
2025-03-11 03:13:34 +0000 UTC View PostWritting Style?
Please read Ch: 122.1 and the notes at the bottom first before voting. But basically, for those of you caught up with Magis-Smithing, what do you think of my writing style?
Which do you think feels better to read? Should I return primarily to Aaliyah's point of view, or should I stay in the third person, like during the...
2025-02-24 23:03:48 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 12
Luke Walker wasn’t one to brag.
Sure, he liked to lord certain things over his little sister.
And maybe he preened every time his parents said something good about him in front of their friends.
Then there was how he enjoyed being the smartest kid ...
2025-02-14 09:09:34 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 11
“No!”
“That’s horrible!”
“What a bunch of butt-heads!”
Luke momentarily lost his cool and smiled. It was uncalled for in their situation, but he couldn't help it. Hailee's last exclamation was just too cute. Luke’s little sister only ...
2025-02-03 21:00:05 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 10
The rest of Luke’s first day of school was utterly boring compared to the first half.
Though, it was probably a good thing nothing else had popped up because Luke wasn’t sure if he could handle another Earth-shattering revelation or cosmic backhand to the face. He had learned the ene...
2025-01-31 21:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 9
No plan was perfect, and Luke didn’t even have that much.
He was supposed to watch Harry from a distance, not interact with him directly. But, however cheesy it may sound, something in Luke refused to sit by and watch what was about to happen, and with it, all his hastily formed plans ...
2025-01-30 21:00:05 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 8
Monday-Thursday
8:30-8:40 Morning Introduction
8:40-9:40 Language Arts
9:40-9:50 Snack/Break
9:50-10:50 Maths
10:50-11:50 Science
11:50-12:50 Lunch
12:50-13:50 Physical Education
13:50-14:50 Humanities
14:50-15:00 Closing Questions
Friday 2025-01-29 09:00:08 +0000 UTC View Post
AMSL Ch: 7
Because of his plethora of memories, many things no longer excited Luke. Visiting new places and experimenting with his powers excited him, but both came in second to spending time with his family.
School wasn't exciting, even in his past life; that went doubly so since he regained his m...
2025-01-28 21:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostCh: 120.4
I knew it was dangerous, but I was starting to get my hopes up.
After a few hours of searching and prepping what little I had and a lot of cutting on Tabitha’s part, my stack of roots had quadrupled in size, and everything was essentially ready. I had fuel, a forge, a crucible, a workstation, and m...
2025-01-28 04:21:48 +0000 UTC View PostAMSL Ch: 6
“Luke…. Luke…. Luke,” A hauntingly cheerful voice grew louder the longer he ignored it. “Mom says it’s time to get up.”
Cracking a single eye open, Luke peeked at his smiling sister standing over him before grunting and turning over to hide his face.
Not ...
2025-01-27 21:00:06 +0000 UTC View Post
