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Loona finding loopholes and vacant laps.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 46 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie recoils, but is still caught in the seat being squeezed by Loona's hip.

MOXXIE: H-hold on. We can't do that sort of thing here. We'll get caught.

P2: Moxxie watches Loona stand up.

LOONA: Yeah, a blowjob here would be crazy...

P3: She sits right on Moxxie's lap. His eyes bulge like a squeeze...

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Back to a normal schedule.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 45 (commentary)

Starting to get impatient there, Loona.

I think Moxxie has a bit of a resistance to most ideas unless his wife is open to it first. He'll still be a little concerned, nervous, or annoyed, but he'll go along with his wife.

So this page will now lead toooo...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 45 inks (commentary)

Loona getting straight to the point.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 45 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie rubs her shoulders as she slightly perks up.

MOXXIE: Is that what you and Millie were talking about?

LOONA: Actually, Millie suggested I apologize by 'treating' you. Like, sucking your dick.

P2: The pair laugh.

MOXXIE/LOONA: Hahahah! Heheheh...

P3: Same panel as before, but they've sto...

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After this page, we'll be returning to our normal schedule.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 44 (commentary)

Maybe I should have Moxxie say "Put those things away!" in the first panel instead? It's a little funnier, I think. It feels like a little more acknowledgement of what he's looking at.

Don't worry, they'll come back soon.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 44 inks (commentary)

A very vulnerable moment with Loona. She wouldn't normally get this emotional so quickly, unless she felt like she was on the precipice of ruining everything.

I also wanted to set up this explanation that even if/when she's in an established relationship, her snarky anger isn't going to disappear. Anger is just a part ...

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P1: Moxxie pulls down her shirt, looking around in a panic to make sure Blitzo isn't around.

MOXXIE: Put those away! What's gotten into you?

P2: Moxxie watches Loona withdraw. She's leaning on the desk, resting her head on it, with her arms over her head, as though she's trying to bury herself as much as possible....

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Loona would rather strip naked than properly apologize. Which kinda makes you wonder how the hell did she learn that apologies are such a wound to one's ego. I guess in her head, Moxxie's already seen her breasts, so it's much easier to show them off again rather than roll over and show weakness.

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It worked on Millie, so it's gotta work on Moxxie, right?

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 43 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie approaches, wary. Loony snaps at him.

MOXXIE: Are you sure I'm not too fat to fit?

LOONA: Just sit, stupid.

P2: Moxxie squeezes in next to her. Loona scratches her head, frustrated.

LOONA: What I wanted to say... uhm. What I'm trying to say...

P3: Loona shuts her eyes, frustrated.

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Mostly recovered from COVID, but I'm still out of town.

We're seeing Loona quickly build up her confidence. Her little tryst with Millie was a big ego boost for her, so she's doing something here that I don't think she would have ever done, with anybody, without more self-confidence.

What could she have to talk ...

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Loona trying to figure out how to be affectionate and keep Moxxie close by.

The anatomy of this damn office seems to constantly change and I have no idea where anything is actually located. But a sofa across from Loona's desk seems to be one of the few permanent fixtures.

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P1: Moxxie fixes his bowtie as he's about to walk off. . Loona suddenly stands from her seat, shouting.

MOXXIE: Well, I'll just get my papers and get to work on--

LOONA: NO! Wait!

P2: Loona continues, trying to be flirtatious, but is still nervous.

LOONA: I mean... I want to say something to you first....

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Loona in the first panel looks like she's already trying to get her hands on Moxxie. But zips her way back to her seat by the last panel.

Millie's talking about the double-page spread earlier, where she clearly decapitated someone, but is giving the credit to Blitzo.

The Sinsmas episode came out the day before pos...

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