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A little double entendre thrown out by Loona here.

I get the impression that Millie keeps her guard up in physical situations, while Moxxie keeps his guard up in social situations... unless they're talking about art, in which case, he won't question anything.

So in a strange way, Loona is a bit intimidated here.<...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 41 draft (script)

P1: Millie pulls Blitzo aside, taking him back to his office.

MILLIE: Boss! You gotta show me that nasty decapitation trick you did!

BLITZO: Me? Wasn't it you who did that?

MILLIE: No, no, it was definitely you!

P2: As Millie leads him away, she turns back to give a thumbs-up to Moxxie and Loona.

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Holiday Schedule

With the holidays here, updates for the next couple weeks will be awkward. I'll be aiming to post every other day, until shortly after New Year's, when the schedule should return to normal.

Apologies for the delays.

Helluva Trio 2 pg 40 (commentary)

If you haven't noticed, Millie's nipple inverted again after that painful moment earlier. It takes a little work to maintain that "erection."

This page will also come out in the middle of tax season, so it'll make for a friendly reminder to everyone to file those forms on time.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 40 inks (commentary)

I think the show somewhat contradicted this idea of Millie being the one to romance Moxxie, but it's not entirely clear. I think it's funnier that Millie was trying to "bag" Moxxie on their first date but realized she needed to ease in a little more.

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P1: Millie calms her down.

MILLIE: Hold yer horses. I didn't bag Moxxie on our very first night together, y'know.

P2: Loona thinks it over.

MILLIE: I had to romance him. He likes that sorta thing.

LOONA: Are you saying... we should go on a date?

P3: Millie coyly bobs her head to side, grinning. 2024-12-14 15:33:28 +0000 UTC View Post

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 39 (commentary)

Gotta soothe that thang before you do any more harm.

Loona here really reminds me a dog that's extremely excited to go somewhere new. Jumping right on you, not realizing how damn big they are, getting right in your face. A nice reminder that Loona is more than just a girl, she's a hellhound.

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Like a kid who just heard exactly what she was hoping for. No restraint at all.

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P1: Loona stands up from her seat, now rubbing Millie's crotch.

LOONA: How's that? Is that good?

MILLIE: Hmm, yeah, that feels very nice.

P2: Because Loona is leaning forward, her breasts are sagging from the gravity and no bra. Millie marvels at Loona's breasts, cupping one.

MILLIE: Y'know, Loona... ...

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If all else fails, give rubbing a chance.

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Glitz and Glam practice

Getting some practice in. They're so incredibly detailed, I'll need to do a character sheet for both characters.

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So while I did want to cover some little explored aspect that's common with sex (and maybe provide a lesson to readers to be wary of), I also have to admit that I'm not fond of Loona's claws. I've been slowly shortening them over time, but now I'll have an excuse to just cut them entirely. Though, that won't happen until at l...

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P1: Loona looks up to a sickly Millie.

LOONA: What's wrong?

MILLIE: Your claws...

P2: Loona looks at her hand, with her long claws at the end.

MILLIE (off-panel): ...please be more careful with those things...

LOONA: Oh fuck. I know how to finger myself just fine but with someone else...

P3...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 37 (commentary)

A little tweak to Millie's dialogue, to hopefully drive in how sharp and painful this is.

Though, I'm still not liking it. If it's an abrupt scream, why is it perfectly horizontal? I might go back and change it again, try to intensify it some more.

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Just when things were getting real fun, Loona makes an amateur mistake.

Horrible sensation, for both parties involved. It's the sort of thing I never seen in erotic stories, despite how prevalent this experience is. Just wanted to give a fair warning to everyone out there, keep those nails trimmed if you plan on spelunk...

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P1: Loona fingers Millie, who closes her eyes to enjoy herself.

MILLIE: Ooooh, mhmmm...

P2: We see inside Millie as Loona curls her finger forward, inadvertently scratching Millie.

P3: Millie reacts in pain.

MILLIE: Gaahh! Gkkk, ackkk....

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