The advance review program for Colette has commenced. Here's the blurb...
Eighteen-year-old Collette’s peaceful life in France is shattered when the Nazi panzers steamroll across her country. She feels compelled to help the nation she loves and joins the Women’s Auxilliary Air Force, training as a ...
2022-11-02 23:39:54 +0000 UTC
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Big news this week - I am now readying Colette (my WW2 novella) for publication! This means spending time fiddling with layout and it can be terribly frustrating trying to get the details right ... such are the joys of the indie author life.
As part of the release proc...
2022-10-15 23:09:22 +0000 UTC
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Beta readers read for free - we authors pay! Go to the link below...
https://storyoriginapp.com/betacopies/8b5b5e9e-04b9-41d3-8530-ec34dfb6a4ef
2022-08-22 10:19:55 +0000 UTC
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Hi there Patrons
The good news is that the first draft (and its associated copy edit pass) is now complete at 20 chapters and over 160,000 words.
I really want your feedback on this - so after exploring various options, I've decided the best option is to do this via the StoryOrigin beta process. You can access th...
2022-04-25 06:09:17 +0000 UTC
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"Through different Eyes" is the sequel to "Through my Eyes. Again. - and it's now getting very close to first draft completion. Chapter 19 is done and I'm into the final chapter. It's been a bit of a journey - Word tells me Chapter 1 was commenced on 27th September 2020 at 9:53pm.
At present, the book is 155,554 words, ...
2022-03-25 10:14:43 +0000 UTC
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Hi there - and early Christmas present for you all!
I've now completed the first draft of chapter 15 and the first line edit of up to chapter 14. So Chapters 1-14 are now available at
https://ln5.sync.com/dl/fb2...
2021-12-20 10:04:23 +0000 UTC
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Hi there folks
For those of you who prefer a real book to hold, the paperback edition of Through my Eyes. Again. is now live on Amazon - much faster than I had anticipated.
So you can now buy this for yourself and as a Christmas present for family and friends - hint hint :-)
To cel...
2021-12-12 23:51:47 +0000 UTC
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Excerpt 4 of Col's diary is now available on the Sync server. The easiest way to get there is via my latest newsletter...
https://mailchi.mp/8a22eb1da23e/plea-for-reviews-13527799
And I'm hoping to have the paperback ve...
2021-11-28 07:48:08 +0000 UTC
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Hi Folks
Its been pointed out to me that Chapter 10 of TDE (first draft) is missing from here.
My apologies - I'm not quite sure what happened, but I must have got confused and posted 11 when I meant to post 10.
Anyhow - here it is...
Please note that future draft chapters of TDE will be avail...
2021-09-19 22:08:55 +0000 UTC
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Hi there
Here's the second except from Col's diary whilst being interrogated bu British Intelligence 'somewhere in England'.
2021-09-11 07:36:00 +0000 UTC
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I am currently working on chapter 13 of TDE - and a new short story involving Colette Roberts. She is the SOE radio operator who befriended Mutti Frida whilst both were imprisoned in Ravensbruck. Mutti Frida's daughter, Colette, is named in her memory. Mutti Frida survived Ravensbruck but Colette did not.
2021-08-30 09:33:51 +0000 UTC
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Saturday 8th September 1962
They gave me back my diary today; it’s been five days. I know because I’ve been counting them since we walked into the Dusseldorf army HQ asking for political asylum. They took everything from us then, including our clothes and my diary. I ended up with some sort...
2021-07-17 10:54:41 +0000 UTC
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Welcome to July (the depths of Australia's winter)!
I have uploaded the first draft of Chapter 10 to the sync server - go to my Discord server for the link (all patrons have access to this - if you're not able to access it, email me and I'll help you). I've also distributed the first 10 draft chapters to my Beta readers...
2021-07-01 10:29:16 +0000 UTC
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I've been running adverts on Amazon for "Through my Eyes. Again." (which sounds expensive but isn't as you only pay for clicks). My ads have been seen nearly 1000 times and have been clicked on 5 times generating 1 sale. I want to try to increase the click rate and thus the purchase rate with a better blurb. The 'average' rat...
2021-06-08 08:11:38 +0000 UTC
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Welcome to May!
Down here in subtropical Australia, that means winter is approaching. Nights are cooling off and we probably have had our last over 30C day until late spring (that's October). The solar heater is keeping the swimming pool warm, but I we will probably turn it off next weekend after a last swim.
I ha...
2021-05-02 07:42:35 +0000 UTC
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Here's the first draft of TDE Chapter 8 - I have some concerns about this chapter being a bit too slow - your feedback would be most useful!
In other news, TMEA how has 5* reviews on Amazon and Goodreads - now all I need is for people to actually buy it (and give it more good reviews to get it up the list). I've been sp...
2021-04-04 07:49:14 +0000 UTC
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My debut novel "Through my Eyes. Again." has been released on all the usual ebook platforms. You can find it a https://books2read.com/u/3GA1O8
The Amazon (US) link is
2021-03-26 06:52:35 +0000 UTC
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I’ve been asked by a few people about the cover of Through my Eyes. Again. as it’s a bit different from the ‘usual’ modern covers. As I started writing an explanation, I thought that you might like a glimpse of what goes on behind the final production of the book. A cover is the ‘hook’ &...
2021-03-19 23:44:36 +0000 UTC
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Let me know which version you like best - faded or vibrant colours?
In other news, TDE chapter 8 is now over 4000 words...
2021-03-07 04:16:57 +0000 UTC
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Hi folks,
I'm really pleased to tell you that the much delayed Chapter 7 of TDE is now available on the Sync server.
It's also available here (below).
As the release date of TMEA approaches, I'm still very busy with marketing activity - but I expect to have Chapter 8 up her by the end of March....
2021-02-14 09:50:12 +0000 UTC
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I have uploaded the final version of Mrs Henderson's Limp to the Sync Server (go to my Discord server for the link). There have been a number of minor corrections and a chunk of new material added at the end.
I will be releasing this short story as a 'teaser' to help build momentum for the launch of TMEA on 24th March....
2021-01-28 11:31:46 +0000 UTC
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I promised you a short story before the end of January - and here it is. Please take a read and enjoy - and give me your constructive criticism from typos all the way through plot, character and pacing.
This story is a prequel to TMEA - giving some of the back story to Mrs Henderson. Will meets her (although...
2021-01-20 07:37:07 +0000 UTC
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I've just completed my first interview as an author! You can find the interview at
https://youtu.be/4zeDEUOXWls
I'd love to here what you think!
2021-01-13 04:23:32 +0000 UTC
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Hi Patrons
For a variety of reasons, I have not been able to make any significant progress with TDE this month and so I have paused your pledges for January. The biggest reason is that I have been working on publishing TMEA and trying to get some marketing in place. As part of that marketing, I am writing a short story ...
2020-12-22 10:57:23 +0000 UTC
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Through my Eyes. Again. is now being published, with a release date of 24th March, 2021. I have been able to do this because of the interest and support shown by readers here. I
My thanks, to you all!
I have published through Draft2Digital, which turned out to be a much simpler task than I had at first fe...
2020-12-17 05:41:23 +0000 UTC
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Well, the 'final' read through of TMEA turned up a few more edits. However, I am now pleased to announce that the ebook version of TMEA is to be published, probably late in January.
Patrons are able to download the final ebook version from the sync server (the link for this is on my Discord server).
I'll announce...
2020-12-14 12:27:04 +0000 UTC
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The final editing pass for Through my Eyes. Again. (grammar and punctuation) had completed and I'm now preparing the final version for self-publishing. I'm not sure how long this is going to take - but it won't be in time for Christmas. When the final version is published, Patrons will be able to acquire the it for f...
2020-12-04 11:26:41 +0000 UTC
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is the end of the academic year, which is now in sight! I will finish all the marking and reporting in the next couple of days and then it's back to work on TDE. The first draft of chapter 7 of TDE is at 2,300 words and I'm still hoping to complete and post this before Christmas.
There's a great deal of other things goi...
2020-11-28 03:08:08 +0000 UTC
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First of all, my apologies as this chapter has taken much longer to surface than I had hoped. Handling the sensitive and very useful feedback from my editor took much more time than I had expected - and there will be another flurry of activity once the punctuation and grammar sweep is returned to me in the next week or so.
2020-11-04 00:02:27 +0000 UTC
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Going back and editing a book is both boring and dangerous: boring because chasing down and eliminating repeated words is just … boring, and dangerous because the temptation is huge to start editing the text around the repeated word, which greatly extends the time to find and rid the text of those wretched repeats. I have e...
2020-10-25 04:00:17 +0000 UTC
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