Th Chase 485
Added 2015-02-05 10:26:09 +0000 UTCThis took forever to edit. It started off as a total mess with some really broken choppy dialogue and it took forever to clean up the conversation between Sparkler and Dinky. I ended up rewriting the Dinky and Sparkler conversation about four times and the last time I focused on dialogue enablers to try and make the conversation a bit more show and a little less tell. I hope it came out okay. So... ever find yourself attracted to a typo? There's an awkward moment of sexuality...
