Becky vs Bugs Page 14
Added 2024-08-26 13:00:12 +0000 UTCIn the midst of giving crucial instructions to Jacqueline, Becky notices the camera angle is a bit lower than it ought to be. A discussion about cinematic technique ensures, as the newly deputized housewife follows her instructions to the best of her ability. The plan works, sort of, with the moth being knocked silly by the refrigerator door. Becky commands the fridge to overload in a maximum fashion, which doesn't have the desired effect, but does put a finer point on things.
It's time to admit that I have a real problem with keeping things simple. My original intention for doing this story was to make something that I could crank out a little faster in order to build up the buffer a little bit so I could have some breathing room to work on the Violet comic, which was going to be multipanel and most likely take a little longer per page. It seemed like a good idea at the time: just a simple splash panel comic where Becky's clothes get eaten by moths, do some soft shading to make it look a bit classy, four to six pages, Bob's your uncle.
Fast forward to this page, and it's basically turned into a de facto multipanel comic. This is basically a comic page: You got three panels, backgrounds, actions are playing out, it's nuts. This isn't to say that I'm unhappy with it or anything, just pointing out that this comic isn't what it started out being. Also I'm happy with Jacqueline's fridge opening pose, she's been a lot of fun to work with in general, so you'll probably be seeing her again sooner rather than later.
Comments
Well we can never be too sure about a nipple hardening process, fortunately the "poing" function is really helpful for that
bio
2024-08-27 15:45:55 +0000 UTCBut you are definitely an ass man
Victoria Black
2024-08-27 02:21:37 +0000 UTCHers are too little
Victoria Black
2024-08-27 02:21:04 +0000 UTCBecky is the exact opposite of Jacqueline. She'll be naked because the contract said so and fair is fair, but she isn't going to take any crap about it ☺️
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 02:03:30 +0000 UTCI'm also quite a fan of it (obvs) my favorite part is the first small little rips and tears that you know are going to get bigger. The continuity is a bear to do, but it's worth it in the end. I remember Rubenval, I'll have to go find some of his stuff again
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 02:01:44 +0000 UTCHis science knowledge seems inversely proportional to his common sense, a surefire recipe for disaster 😮
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:59:07 +0000 UTC...but never close enough! 😮
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:57:30 +0000 UTCThe poing lets you know she's at the perfect temperature 😉 That angle's going to win them an Emmy!
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:56:26 +0000 UTCShe's lucky she didn't put someone's eye out 😄
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:54:01 +0000 UTCPrim, proper and easily flustered seems to be my wheelhouse for enf characters. Hmmm, maybe we should see Jacqueline do some chores...even some grocery shopping 🤔
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:53:25 +0000 UTCI'd love to do that, but the story is already done and in the buffer. I'll work it into a future story for sure, though!
Legmuscle
2024-08-27 01:50:08 +0000 UTCI love Becky's confidence. She doesn't let being in her birthday suit deter her from doing what she does best.
stanleybatman9
2024-08-26 22:41:38 +0000 UTCI love these stories where the clothes gradually disintegrate over the course of the comic. The more clothes she starts with and the longer it takes the better. Reminds me of some of Rubenval’s comics from back in the day.
martod
2024-08-26 21:57:58 +0000 UTCwho knows what other scientific snafus Jacqueline's husband will get her into? once he's done cocooning of course
memfic
2024-08-26 16:10:55 +0000 UTCDamn. "Objects in mirror are closer than they appear."
Swallows999
2024-08-26 15:17:40 +0000 UTC*poing poing* 👀 I love the "dramatic angle" of the camera 🤣
bio
2024-08-26 13:35:45 +0000 UTC*Poing!*
Victoria Black
2024-08-26 13:17:40 +0000 UTCGlad to hear we can expect to see more of Jacqueline! Prim and proper mid-century housewife is the perfect kind of character for you - and seeing her lose her clothes to a series of mishaps while cooking or cleaning would be 👌!
Scott Francis
2024-08-26 13:08:05 +0000 UTCwith the boot idea, possibly her toes could poke out if the moths are still eating the shoes?
Xander Grogan
2024-08-26 13:03:09 +0000 UTC
