2 versions of the same joke
Added 2023-02-16 01:21:41 +0000 UTCWhich delivery works better?:
version 1: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/If9JUNhzM2Q
version 2: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/IvVx2Qx7ZP4
version 3: "neither of them work because I fundamentally disagree with the premise"
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2023-03-04 04:42:21 +0000 UTC1
Sophie Ruth
2023-02-26 05:35:54 +0000 UTCVersion 2 is better my tiny mind can’t comprehend version 1
Jar Of Sadness
2023-02-17 21:30:00 +0000 UTCI like version 2, it has more a rhythm? Nice stove by the way.
DopamineDealer
2023-02-17 10:57:56 +0000 UTCI "got" the joke on version 2 better (my first language not English might factor into that somehow)
DopamineDealer
2023-02-17 10:53:55 +0000 UTCI agree with Lumina. Version 1 is the best one.
Fiona
2023-02-17 05:22:08 +0000 UTCVersion 1 works better. I will not elaborate.
Lumina
2023-02-16 20:42:04 +0000 UTCI like the continuous dialogue of version 2 but I like the lines from version 1 better
Akilan Narayanaswamy
2023-02-16 16:23:52 +0000 UTC1
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2023-02-16 12:12:55 +0000 UTCAlso, the continuous shot of version 2 is better looking, though I don't know if the shorts format would make it too difficult to do that with version 1's lines. Maybe a cut after the silent generation would make sense, and then another cut just before gen z (so you can get that sweet sweet perfect loop with the greatest generation)
Moses McGhee
2023-02-16 10:58:56 +0000 UTCThe line the silent generation says in version two is great, and makes it really clear what the analogy is. Version 1 is better as a concept, because it really shows the way the steps are reasonable enough between the generations. However the slow fades between the generations names from version 2 is between at joining the time period together, when I watched version 1 the first time, I couldn't read what the generations were until a couple had slipped by already
Moses McGhee
2023-02-16 10:53:41 +0000 UTCif i have to choose, i think 2 is a lot more intuitive and resonant, and that the dialogue is much better. they’re both great, as usual. maybe you should try blending them together a little.
evolutionary autocannibal
2023-02-16 10:39:11 +0000 UTC
