The Calamitous Bob 38: The Mountain Folk
Added 2021-03-19 08:02:32 +0000 UTCComments
Some quick edits: //Your Grace. -> (needs an extra space) had a distant quality that some could find distant. -> distinct quality(?) depicted important scenes of hunt and migrations, -> hunts Viv found herself face-to-face with big hat. -> the big hat.(?) When Maradoc, the god of secrets, -> the God of Secrets, when I say “as useful as skis in Harrak?” -> when I say 'as useful as skis in Harrak?'" he finally declared, and led everyone inside.” -> inside. As far as designed were concerned, she thought it was a bit stupid -> designs
Nicholas Paterson
2021-08-13 06:21:37 +0000 UTCGood that you noticed haha. Yes she has that but only to a minor extent.
Mecanimus
2021-07-22 10:41:39 +0000 UTCthere's actually a surprising number of people who get upset at the sound of people eating. Misophonia(can be for other sounds too) is estimated to effect 15% of the population.
ShadeByTheSea
2021-07-22 02:32:06 +0000 UTCLoveItLoveItLoveIt!
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2021-03-22 12:12:13 +0000 UTCTaking notes
Mecanimus
2021-03-20 07:16:30 +0000 UTC"never all three at once" LoL, brilliant.
RageBone
2021-03-19 15:14:15 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2021-03-19 13:44:14 +0000 UTCI think it's okay. She is in adventurer mode and they like her already. If she gets powerful enough she can switch to full majesty mode and they will just fall on their knees.
Young Youghurt
2021-03-19 09:01:27 +0000 UTCIf Ari is the dread pirate then I think Bob could be know as: "black rider Bob".
Young Youghurt
2021-03-19 08:59:25 +0000 UTCHmmmm mixed feelings about this one.. On the one hand, it was a very relaxed and enjoyable chapter. On the other I don't like that Viv was so casual and open with the mountain people. Regardless of what she might think she IS the last member of the emperial family and heir to the throne, they are her future subjects and will undoubtedly prove very useful when the time comes for her to rebuild the empire. Oh well, it's early days...
L Pedersen
2021-03-19 08:10:22 +0000 UTC
