The Calamitous Bob part 4 (Chapters 35-48)
Added 2021-07-05 02:44:25 +0000 UTCThose chapters have been proofread and edited, I'd recommend reading those instead of the independent chapters.
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I checked and the pdf works at least. Sorry it's on your end man.
Mecanimus
2021-08-12 13:54:36 +0000 UTCI can't seem to use these links 😕
Gabe Canada
2021-08-12 00:00:34 +0000 UTCI had a nightmare, so you get comments and corrections. sometimes sometime Unfortunately. The Unfortunately, the Magical status modification: draconic surrogate mother . Ha! Suck it George! “Pot, meet kettle.” //That's discriminatory against golems. scaly hand tickled the meat drawer. Squeee! grand Great beast strai Beast trail scietific scientific
luda305
2021-07-16 08:47:56 +0000 UTCThe compilation seems faulty. When they are on the trip to the mountain folk the next page/chapter is talking with some inquisitor out of the blue, seemingly at her home.. Also no paragraph break between different settings, apart from the many leftover typos in the "corrected" version. So will rather read the single posts since the compilation is irritatingly confusing in it's spacing. Love your story though, otherwise I wouldn't be here 😁😂. All the best to you, great work!
Deinos
2021-07-10 05:56:35 +0000 UTC
