Flashfic: Dumb Fox
Added 2020-07-17 16:00:04 +0000 UTCIn which a younger and less wise Suisshu, just off the boat from her homeland, encounters an exceptionally rude lavender dryad. The kitsune can't help but have some fun at the bimbo's expense... but is Swish so sure she's in control of this situation?
Hello, my lovelies! It's time once again for lavender dryads and bimbofication headpets and everyone's favorite foxgirl! Here's an old flashfic requested ages and ages ago. (I told you I'd get to all of them eventually!)
I loved writing this! I like the new way I've been writing lately—a sprint or two for a flashfic in the early morning to warm up before the main content, and if the flashic exceeds 2,000 words, I either turn it into a full chapter or cut it off there with a cliffhanger.
I mean, this one got to 3,000 words, so, um, still some kinks to iron out, but hey, at least it's finished! Ish! :P
I might continue this story and pad it out so I can post it as a public chapter, but I also love the ending as-is, so what do you all think?
Comments
Hahaha! I was wondering, too!
Lorelei
2020-10-01 15:48:41 +0000 UTCI can't believe it. After all that time requesting it, I missed when the flashfic was actually posted! Fortunately, it was well worth the wait.
acroPhobia
2020-10-01 03:13:00 +0000 UTCI'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your thoughts. <3
Lorelei
2020-07-20 18:51:26 +0000 UTCThat's where I'm at with it!
Lorelei
2020-07-20 18:51:09 +0000 UTCHee! Isn't she?
Lorelei
2020-07-20 18:51:01 +0000 UTCI think it works great as is. The hypnosmut bit has a lovely conclusion and I really like that we don’t find out whether there even is a water fey around or if Swish simply ”considered herself fairly learned in all subjects” enough to make an educated guess and get it confidently wrong.
Pangolin
2020-07-18 22:18:48 +0000 UTCHmm this is a tough one, I like the suggestive ending, but also want to see where you would take the story from there.
Gavin Hahn
2020-07-17 20:18:00 +0000 UTCWhat cute little flashfic. Swish is such a good kitry hahaha.
Zanni
2020-07-17 17:23:27 +0000 UTC
