August Sketch 2 - OC comic layout

Added 2022-08-13 08:48:54 +0000 UTC

Just gotta fix some dialogue that sounds a little off, but here's a preview for a commissioned comic of Cleo and Chaeri 🥰 The first two pages will be black and white and the last page will be full color. Some context: Cleo lives in a dorm near Chaeri's school, and Chaeri lives with her mom and stepdad. Their mom has become increasingly neglectful and withdrawn from the family, and as a result Cleo has been seeing herself forced to take on more and more caretaking duties. She's starting to be more present in Chaeri's life. In this short comic, Chaeri was called out for breaking her school's dress-code by wearing a skirt that is slightly too short. Cleo is annoyed she's the one having to deal with this since their mom won't, so instead of bringing her a change of clothes she decides to get Chaeri out of school for the day (she probably thinks it's going to piss off their parents, but they likely won't care...). When they both get to her room Chaeri notices all the lingerie and skimpy clothing lying around, as well as magazines and photos featuring Cleo. She already knew Cleo did some modeling on the side, but it's clearly becoming a full-fledged career at this point... and leaning more towards the adult and "gravure" side of it than she'd known. She's flustered seeing her cool older sister in this light... but Cleo interprets her reaction as curiosity and envy, so she offers to lend her a bikini that she wore in a magazine cover to try on. Chaeri agrees and is a little confused and shy, but Cleo is genuinely very appreciative of how cute her little sister looks. Essentially they're finding themselves attracted to each other, while the other is clueless about it 😈 I hope everyone enjoys this and looks forward to the completed version!