October 12 - WIP
Added 2016-10-12 11:28:19 +0000 UTCHere is the sketch of the newest Comic for the Birbi X//DD I hope it is not too malevolent, I am actually a little sorry for your character Q//Q X//DD Especially because he looks really scared and worried already and I thought I might even add some little tears because he couldn't see her anymore when he is in the water to rescue Hikari x//DD QuQ
Just in case it isn't clear what Hikari is doing: She is pushing a big rock into the water so it soudns like she is falling in, then she is throwing small stones to make it sound like a fight in the water or the like lol
I hope I haven't done too many spelling mistakes and if so please tell me QuQ You wanted some german stuff in it as well so I added: "Heute wirst du büßen" which means something like "You are going to pay today" and on the last panel: "Rache ist süß", which you might have an idea already, means "Revenge is sweet" X///DDD
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Oh whoops my bad then! In that case it seems you did everything right, then x//D
Coulias
2016-10-13 12:40:27 +0000 UTCHehe I am so happy you like it already, I can't wait to see it finished eitehr x//D Q//u//Q And for the typos, it does say "there" and it also does say "it's", probably my handwriting makes it not looking like that x/D QQ lol But I will write some parts a little more clear when it's done anyway x//D
Riina
2016-10-13 09:35:35 +0000 UTCOmg this looks great so far x//D I really can't wait to see how this will turn out! About the spelling I only noticed two typos as of now, or maybe just one, in the fourth panel, I'm not too sure if what you wrote is "there" or "their" but the correct one is "there", just making sure! And the fifth panel, it's "it's" and not "its" but that is such a small typo that it doesn't really change anything x/D but all and all, it's really good! I'll double check in the next WIP, also thanks for adding some german too x/D
Coulias
2016-10-13 04:54:25 +0000 UTC
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