Game Night pg. 3...
Added 2018-08-13 16:54:51 +0000 UTC...the story progresses!
Hey! It's Dean! Look at that hair!
A little back story, there was a five page comic sequence I had planned called "Moving In" where Dean is helping Meg unpack at her new place. While that is going on, Ellie calls Dean on his phone and asks a few questions about Meg. Meg is of course there and eavesdrops a little.
It was an interesting scene, I think. It was fun. It was cute. It was...boring. Fluff that did little to actually move the story forward. The entire point of the scene is basically summed up here in a single page; Ellie making sure that Meg is a stable person before getting involved (a crucial step for any Sub [or Dom] that I rarely see brought up in erotica [there is a bit of this in Meg's back story that may become relevant later]).
New page coming up later this week (Hopefully Wednesday) followed by a new sexy pin up! Hope you'll look forward to it!
Comments
This stuff can always be revisited. Been tooling around with the idea of a story arc for dean. He won’t be involved with any of the main four, but he might still have a story to tell.
Stereoscope Comics
2020-09-24 14:32:08 +0000 UTCI think it could have been interesting to go over it a bit more. As you said it's something that is often overlooked in these kinds of stories, and I genuinely have no idea what kind of questions a sub should/would ask. Maybe because I'm a dom myself and it doesn't feel like something I should be concerned with, but still... Oh well.... it's done now...
PulpFiction
2020-09-24 12:27:29 +0000 UTCSensible gal!
Michael
2018-08-14 13:46:54 +0000 UTChaha, great little update. Also, it's good to showcase Ellie being precautious. You never know who you're dealing with and that always important to stress, especially with this subject. I'm glad to see the trend of showcasing safety, plus you did it in a humors way. Bonus points!
kou32
2018-08-14 02:43:52 +0000 UTC
