BLACK LABEL Chapter 1 PDF...

Are there also PDFs of the other chapters?

PulpFiction

You said you had a list of edits to do before this goes to print and to point out mistakes. Page 23 4th panel, Meg says "furthur" instead of "further". Page 37 2nd panel: I think it should be "that sucker's mine" (add an apostrophe in "suckers" since it is a contraction of "is", but I'll be honest I'm not 100% sure how contractions work in this case. I might be wrong) Page 46 2nd panel: "See ya round sucker". I'm not sure if you spelled it like this to signify playfulness or for style, but if not, it should be "around". Page 49 2nd panel : Meg forgot the "it" at the end of "Seriously, I think I needed." Last page, 3rd panel, "radiates" is missing the second a. Also, this seems to be the tame version for DA. Hentai-foundry has a more explicit depiction of her reading the book for the first time, as well as showing sex toys on the first page. Will it go to print with the explicit version or the DA version? Full disclosure English is my second language so take my notes on grammar with a grain of salt. I do have an eye for missing details though, which tends to make me good at proof reading ;-)

PulpFiction

Your welcome! It’s been a long time coming.

Stereoscope Comics

Gotcha! All that happened the night of the party, of course. After seeing Rl’s reaction to the book (target acquired) Meg had a chance for a short conversation with Ellie (asking her if she could flip through the book). The chat is short as El is dragged off by some other friends leaving meg alone with the book. This gave her the chance to flip through the book a bit and leave the note. This will be revealed later in the flashback on Valentine’s Day. Hope that clarifies. Let me know if you have any other questions.👍

Stereoscope Comics

OK, help me out, please... I can't figure out how Meg got the time to write the note and slip it into the book. I guess she could know the book well enough to reference a specific page, but I just can't figure out the time sequence and slight-of-hand there.

Fritz Sands

Thanks! This is delightful to have all in one place.

Fritz Sands

That was from the Valentine’s Day comic. It is canon but doesn’t get revealed until much later in the comic. I love that scene too. Actually means quite a bit to me. 😊

Stereoscope Comics

where did the wifi password page from the party go? I thought that was a really nice meeting with Meg?

EdTheRabbit

I don't think i ever read it all together in one go before, I love this story even more now :)

Michael

Ya. It’ll definitely have that before it goes to print. 👍

Stereoscope Comics

It's not very clear that the last three pages are extras of questionable cannon. Maybe declaring it's the end in bigger font and adding a header letting the reader know what is up with those last pages would improve clarity.

PiLambdaOd

Ah yes, the other pdf was book zero. That had about half of chapter 1 and the comics I was doing before I got started on the actual story comics. I think it’s still in the archives if you do a search for pdf. Maybe I’ll repost it when I get home tomorrow.

Stereoscope Comics

The last three pages are bonus comics and not part of the actual comic. I have so many bonus comics planned...

Stereoscope Comics

Thanks for assembling the pdf. Are the last 3 pages out of sequence? They appear to be from earlier, maybe between pages 16/17.

Mike U

Thanks for posting the pdf--this is awesome! Is this the one you published a physical copy of? I remember getting that one some time ago, but it's been so long I've lost track of where it is...

Shrub Jump

Thanks so much! Yeah, I’ve got a list of edits I’ll need to make down the road, so if you see them feel free to share.

Stereoscope Comics

Phenomenal work, really nice to see it all combined together, really gives more of a feel for the characters! Probably my favorite comic of the type since Sunstone! Noticed a small typo with "Scensory" instead of "Sensory" on page 25 if you think you want to address that, though it's truly no big deal! Nicely done

The came for the bondage, they stayed for the story...everything’s going exactly as planned. (~￣▽￣)~

Stereoscope Comics

Happy Birthday!🎉 seriously, I hope you take time to do something special for yourself today. I recommend steak. 🥩

Stereoscope Comics

Now I can finally read the whole thing through and not just read for the BDSM, but stay for the characters...and BDSM.

Brad Kitts

This is awesome that it came out today! Turned 27 today

kou32

Woo, thank you so much for this! 💜 I'm glad we get to see this story come together. It's been a lot of fun to see. Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

kou32