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Oooooh...very good points!

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She'd be a Cleric of order, entire sub class is based around making others do as you say. The order spell list includes Comman, Hold Person, Compulsion and of course Dominate Person. Sounds like it's perfect for her.

Humanflea

There’s going to be some drama here and there, but I’m going to try my best to keep them out of the hospital. ;)

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Been rolling the transition note around in my head. Your not the only one to spot it. Have a couple ideas that might work. We shall see. Thanks for the note!👍

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Well, that turned out all right. You had me worried that, I don't know, Ellie would end up in the hospital or something from all those tight, tight ropes. But it will be interesting to see what Val was about to ask Meg (unless it was just, "do you like to play D&D?"), and where that may lead the story from here. Nice way to keep us wondering.

Shrub Jump

Meg as a cleric? Healing, support and a bit of combat power? That actually kind of works, it's also a really good and slightly sneaky way to get a shy person to work with the rest of the group :)

Michael

Oooooh...that’s a tad different from what I’ve got planned...but very interesting... 😗

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Good to see this night ended well. A bit of a scare from earlier, but seems to be resolved. For now. This does feel like a bit of a sudden jump between this page and the last one, like just an extra panel or two of transition. Like Val reaching for a book, thinking it might be the bondage book, then use seeing it's just the role-playing books. Overall, a nice update. I love how casual the two of them are in the last 2 panels.

kou32

I can see meg playing a death cleric.

There is some content missing. Part of it will be a bonus comic (played purely for laughs) and the other will be explored much later when we get to Val’s story arc. Thanks for the constructive criticism. I’ll keep it in mind when I review the finished chapter. It might just need an extra something. If so I can work it in before I start chapter 3. 👍

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Feels like there is a missing page here. Maybe it's just me, but it seems like there is a big jump between what the characters are doing between pages. Kinda like between 15 and 16.

PiLambdaOd

I am trying to wrap my head around anyone not knowing anything about role-playing games. That is some pretty determined avoidance of a lot of common popular culture. But maybe it just comes from raising gamer boys.

Fritz Sands