Chapter 3, Page 17...
Added 2019-09-24 04:38:31 +0000 UTC...Feeling conflicted. I know I can do better with this and the two previous pages. They're fine, but they're far from what I originally imagined and I compromised a bit for the sake of time. I plan to give them another go when I prep the comic for print (maybe it's just beyond my skill at this point) but I don't want to wait.
Here's the plan...Next page, I'm going to shoot for the stars and knock it out of the park. I'm not going to rush myself. I'm going to take the whole week if I have to. Next page is gonna Rawk!
Comments
Breakfast of Champions, they called it in my misspent youth 😁
Fyunch Click
2019-09-25 19:01:56 +0000 UTC"Vagina: All Part of a Complete Balanced Breakfast!" :D
Shrub Jump
2019-09-25 02:07:33 +0000 UTCXD
Stereoscope Comics
2019-09-24 16:06:59 +0000 UTCHard. To. Focus.
Fyunch Click
2019-09-24 15:57:18 +0000 UTCIndeed. :)
Stereoscope Comics
2019-09-24 15:56:39 +0000 UTCSeems like end of Miss Nice Meg. Time for her to increse the tempo.
Fenix
2019-09-24 15:35:50 +0000 UTCI really want her to flat out order meg to go get laid XD
Henri Black
2019-09-24 09:22:02 +0000 UTCBut of course!
Stereoscope Comics
2019-09-24 05:17:06 +0000 UTCI still like this page, the meaning of the conversation still comes across visually. Also, I'd let either of them take control of me anytime.
smack54
2019-09-24 05:12:58 +0000 UTCSounds good. If I can get the next couple pages the way I want, I’ll go back and redo them. For now, I’ll slow down and take my time (no more rushing).
Stereoscope Comics
2019-09-24 05:00:41 +0000 UTCAgreed
kou32
2019-09-24 04:49:28 +0000 UTCNothing wrong with coming back and reworking things as needed. It's a good page with a nice flow. From the past page ideas it looked like you were going for something more dynamic. But nothing wrong with toning it down and saving it for later or a re-vamp. Looking forward to the next one!
kou32
2019-09-24 04:48:01 +0000 UTCYeah, don't compromise quality for quantity. Work your craft to your satisfaction.
Fritz Sands
2019-09-24 04:47:48 +0000 UTCThank you! First thing I’ll fix! (I put it in without much thought. Looks weird)
Stereoscope Comics
2019-09-24 04:45:16 +0000 UTCI like it ! Just the "struggle" thing... Not very good...
Laurent Lacouture
2019-09-24 04:43:18 +0000 UTC
