Chapter 3, Page 5...
Added 2019-07-22 06:59:35 +0000 UTCPosted before midnight PST!!!!
Comments
The original sequence suggested a subtext of concern which in the greater story makes sense but felt clunky here. Also, it wasn’t necessary to move the story forward. Works much better this way.
Stereoscope Comics
2019-07-23 01:29:35 +0000 UTCInteresting that you flipped the left and center panels in the bottom row when you added the text. The final order makes sense to me. I'm intrigued how the other sequence made sense.
Fyunch Click
2019-07-23 00:03:17 +0000 UTCNever an easy subject to breach I know but wow Meg went from zero to scary in a heartbeat!
Michael
2019-07-22 07:25:10 +0000 UTChaha, oh dear. Drama! oof, that stink eye.
kou32
2019-07-22 07:01:10 +0000 UTC
