WIPs!...
Added 2022-05-26 18:17:29 +0000 UTC...I keep accidentally writing short stories. It's at the point that I should probably start farming them out to other artists. This one a noir inspired story of a chauffeur who takes on an unusual, and dangerous client.
Also, Meg is helping Ellie with her posture again.
New page will hopefully be up this Saturday! Hope you'll look forward to it!
Comments
I hope to see that last scene in Meg and ellie's next session.
Dragon86
2022-05-30 22:22:06 +0000 UTCEssentially yes, although we'll see how this chapter progresses. Believable character development is part of why this comic stands out against others. I personally wouldn't have it otherwise. (Creates a buildup that makes the payoff all the sweeter.) What happens to Ellie next is key to how Val ends up tied down "orgasming" upon a bed. If I was to hazard a guess, we're going to see Ellie go from the "suggestion" and "dress" phase of sex to her first full-on penetration, tongue and fingers BDSM sex. That introduction/acceptance would allow for the implication of progression between this chapter's end, and the start of Val's involvement. It would basically justify Ellie's behavior in/as a complete submissive (VOLUNTARY=Very Important) sex-pet role, allowing for focus to shift onto Val and Sam.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-28 21:53:28 +0000 UTCSo we're just a chapter away from Val-ices adventures in bondageland?!?
Henri Black
2022-05-28 10:04:51 +0000 UTCI agree!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-27 05:09:05 +0000 UTCMe, looking at that last drawing: (TI__LT)
Shrub Jump
2022-05-27 03:45:53 +0000 UTCOh don't you worry, I trust your storytelling instincts. And like I said, I'm glad you're setting up an actual progression here. Your work wouldn't be as good without the buildup.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-27 03:35:11 +0000 UTCThe bottom one! ٩( ᐛ )و
Stereoscope Comics
2022-05-27 02:36:12 +0000 UTCAnd far as extreme sex…well, Val’s arc is just a chapter away! 😙🎶
Stereoscope Comics
2022-05-27 02:35:06 +0000 UTCAnd no worries! There are no limits on comments. I love the conversation and it often points out the strengths and weaknesses of the work (even if it isn’t obvious to anyone but me). 👍
Stereoscope Comics
2022-05-27 02:33:21 +0000 UTCThere is one other potential here, and last comment I promise. Once they're both introduced, the potential for the two trying something on "amature" terms is very real. If that happens, it could be a wakeup call for Meg that she'd better get involved, or this COULD turn dangerous! It might be a good semi-dark way of clarifying the dangers of BDSM without getting too serious. (Meg berating Sam = "I was trained by a pro.... DO NOT step outside what you know!")
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-27 01:50:09 +0000 UTCThat's going to particularly count for both Sam and Val. Val is "in the loop" at this point, but not in on or used to the fun. And I still love that artwork of Sam shaking life a leaf as she folds a bound-up Ellie's crotch. "What the Fucken hell am I DOING?!" There's going to be that moment before she fully realizes how much she likes it.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-27 01:46:19 +0000 UTCHardly! It requires some patience, but puts your comic above a lot of others. So good move ultimately.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-27 01:43:16 +0000 UTCTrue, but a little too simple for me. (ﾉ °٢° )ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧*´¨) ¸.•´¸.•*´¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•` ✧ OVER COMPLOCATION!
Stereoscope Comics
2022-05-26 23:12:44 +0000 UTCHorny is a valid motivation.
Henri Black
2022-05-26 23:10:14 +0000 UTCSame here! Believe me, it was soooooo tempting to just pull all the stops out in the last chapter, but it would have changed both Meg and Ellie’s motivations and we would have missed out on some fun upcoming plot points. We’re getting close though, so I’ll be testing out a lot of scenarios. More WIPs next week!🎸🎶
Stereoscope Comics
2022-05-26 21:04:48 +0000 UTCI'm really REALLY looking forward to the more extreme sex. The bottom image looks about right for exactly that description. That said, I am legitimately glad there was a buildup to this. It's a step often (But not always) skipped in these stories, but helps tremendously here.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2022-05-26 20:56:55 +0000 UTCThe Noir story looks fascinating and that Chauffer is cute! Ooh, and that bottom image... 😍
Michael
2022-05-26 20:39:38 +0000 UTCloving the noir vibe of the sketches, and the meg and ellie piece is too much fun ^^
kou32
2022-05-26 19:03:25 +0000 UTCBDSM helps with posture. Another good reason to look into it.
Death of Ink
2022-05-26 18:46:32 +0000 UTCHeading into the forest again.....keep your eye on the prize.......Meg would make you, you know ;)
Bruce Burding
2022-05-26 18:36:31 +0000 UTCThat bottom one... 0.o
NoMayGusta
2022-05-26 18:18:20 +0000 UTC
