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This is that the animator came up with for a Thumbnail. The title would now just be 'One Way Street'. Any thoughts/feedback appreciated

This is that the animator came up with for a Thumbnail. The title would now just be 'One Way Street'. Any thoughts/feedback appreciated

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Maybe it would be good idea to add subtitles to animation. I find the video distracting. I am not native english speaker and i struggle with understanding when i watch the video because it takes my focus somewhere else. Lot of viral animated videos do it this way, they probably do it for reason ;) if i just listen or just see the face motion, no problem at all to understand

Just watch the video man, it's out now.

Hugo Matiz

I'm confused by the two guys wearing crowns. Are they kings? Are they privileged, and if so, why would they need empathy?

DC

I like the idea behind the picture, quite representative of what to expect. The two words "for" and "man" are crooked because they are on signs, so I think to see them straight would be easier on the eyes. But I can't wait to see the video, that sounds like a super interesting subject!

Text in the thumbnail should be larger. I’m also not keen on the separation between “for” and “men”, but if the words are larger then it might be ok.

Blair

I'm interested in what you have come up with, Alex. I think the illustration is pretty good..

There is this quote I once read that said "God loves man, man loves woman, woman loves babies and babies love puppies. The only way going back up to the top is, puppies respect babies, babies respect mommies(women) women respect men and men can only respect God - as women can only respect man. Not love him. "


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