Arcane short fanfic process
Added 2022-01-11 15:58:13 +0000 UTCI don't know if you heard of it, but recently one of Arcane's script writers shared a tweet with a concept for a scene. I really liked it, so I decided to write a short illustrated fanfic. And as it happened before, I come here to ask for suggestions for the illustrations I'm going to include. Here you have some sketches I've already done.
The plan is to include 5 illustrations plus a an extra drawing as cover, so feel free to send ideas my way!
You can read the fic in the PDF attached in the link below (it is short, only 4-5 pages long). I'd also be very grateful if you let me know about any typos you may see if you read it or suggestions to improve it.
Looking forward to reading your ideas!
Thank you for your help
P.S: I'm trying new things and I started sketching digitally recently. Also, designing some backgrounds. Let's see how it turns out XD
Zero
Comments
please, PLEASE do correct teachers XD. And thank your typo master, I'm fixing them first thing tomorrow ^^
Paula Aguilar
2022-01-13 21:49:24 +0000 UTCFinally found the time in a hectic work week to read your Arcane fic. XD Delicious drama, better than a cold glass of water on a sunny day. :3 And since you asked (the grammar nazi in me can't help it, still don't like being that guy that points out mistakes though). Some of them are typos, some are grammar: "She had almost reached with (<--) her..." page 1, line 28. "...window and realised it was dar (dark)." page 2, line 5. "...not protect her from its (her, I'm assuming you meant Vi's demons and not the house's demons.) own demons." page 2, line 34-35. "She and Powder (Powder and her) freezing..." page 3, line 19-20. "...Caytlyn (Caitlyn) had become..." page 3, line 28. "...she was terrfied (terrified)..." page 3, line 31. "...where it was as lon (long)..." page 3, line 34. "She through (threw) herself against..." page 4, line 6. "She couldn't breath, she was downing (I'm assuming you meant drowning)..." page 4, line 11. "...sob escaped involuntarily (involuntarily escaped OR escaped involuntarily from) her lips..." page 4, line 22. Growing up I was told I should never correct teachers, so this feels doubly weird/wrong... :| (Even though I passed a TEFL course).
Aegeus
2022-01-13 21:13:25 +0000 UTCYes!! You can already read it, it's attached to the post ^^
Paula Aguilar
2022-01-11 19:30:48 +0000 UTCOh a fanfic about Arcane. I'm looking forward to reading it and excited to see the illustrations!
TheTyrann1992
2022-01-11 18:17:26 +0000 UTC
