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Added 2023-01-23 20:06:43 +0000 UTCHey y'all! I need your opinion... Does the little doodle I stuck next to the narration box reading "a child waiting for a bubble to pop" look ok? Should I include it into the final page, or is it too disruptive? I have two versions to look at here!
And Grillby felt something close to desperate impatience begin to mix with his fear and annoyance as the silence between the two of them began to grow.
Just tell me what I need to pay you and get the hell out of my bar you creepy old bastard , Grillby thought but instead of saying anything that remotely resembled that sentence, he chose to go with a friendlier way to break the ice.
“Can I get you anything to drink Don Gaster?”
Comments
It would fun to have Tiny Wings on a doodle page annoying Sans.
Zuviele (Kim)
2023-01-31 17:41:04 +0000 UTChey if you don't keep mini gaster i say use him for tapas updates like season endings and maybe a sticker of keychain idea later.
Brittney
2023-01-31 06:58:34 +0000 UTCI love tiny wingdings, seeing how small and innocent he was as a kid to now being the don boss of snowdin is incredible
PamTown
2023-01-27 22:12:06 +0000 UTCPerhaps it would be better, if Gaster actually looked more like the imagined child. Like enjoing the smoke more and blowing the smoke more playfully...
Michaela Hellmich
2023-01-24 15:47:58 +0000 UTCI'm sad to say it does break u[ the flow of the scene a bit, even though it is the most adorable Wingdings I have ever seen, thank you for blessing us with it🙌
Dacia61
2023-01-24 11:13:33 +0000 UTCYes! It’s adorable! It also gives an amusing and stark contrast to the serious and intimidating aura Wingdings puts off.
Sarah Akers
2023-01-24 09:49:28 +0000 UTCThe most adorable thing I've ever seen...
shuru
2023-01-24 02:58:13 +0000 UTCI love it it contrast how gaster actually looks
Brittney
2023-01-24 00:43:12 +0000 UTCI like it more with, it creates a better sense of imagery on what’s happening
Mica
2023-01-23 23:33:57 +0000 UTCI like the imagery, too me at least it helps add to the annoyance Grillby is feeling having this guy drive out customers just to blow smoke at him.
SimpleSkelly
2023-01-23 22:34:08 +0000 UTCPersonally i like it better without, but i think it could be included in like a goof page
Ardelia
2023-01-23 22:32:23 +0000 UTCOH MY GOD MY BOY THE LIL GUY THE LIL BOY HES SO CUTE ADJHKSLSBVEHSHSBNSKAKNWN
Void
2023-01-23 22:31:37 +0000 UTCI agree with this; I thought the narration envoked a funny image that could have been implimented better had I pursued it from the start, but it was a last-minute addition and I think that appears quite obvious ><"" Thanks for the input!! I feel confident in removing the little doodle now!!! XOXO
Melikas
2023-01-23 22:31:20 +0000 UTCI agree with this, it’s adorable and I love the tiny wingdings, but it doesn’t really fit with the scene around it.
Jessica
2023-01-23 22:17:17 +0000 UTCIMO it looks better without the doodle. It doesn't fit the tense situation, I think.
catsunelli
2023-01-23 21:46:07 +0000 UTCOh my god! Tiny WingDings stole my heart, oh my lord! Bless you for bringing up the softest image of little Wings
PamTown
2023-01-23 21:43:15 +0000 UTCI don't think it's getting in the way, for me. It's also cute to see Don Gaster like that ^^
Christina 'EvilTwinSister'
2023-01-23 21:36:05 +0000 UTCYEAH I've been pretty split! I feel like people wouldn't mind seeing it, but I didn't want it getting too much in the way!
Melikas
2023-01-23 21:30:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback!! I've been so iffy!!! This helps for sure!
Melikas
2023-01-23 21:30:18 +0000 UTCI kind of like the one where it's included better hehe🤭
Kamari-Babineaux
2023-01-23 20:20:48 +0000 UTCI think it looks cute!! But I think it could also work without it ^^
Christina 'EvilTwinSister'
2023-01-23 20:17:04 +0000 UTC
