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Neighborhood Chronicles AU Extended - Amber’s Birthday Weekend - PART 3

Saturday Morning

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Also I have decided not to read or comment on NC until after Christmas and New year. I need to broaden my mind to other stories. And also it will make it more fascinating when I come back to read this one.

Tony Midwood

How awesome would it be for them to play a game of Twister. Really it was just the three of them. Amber ,Jack and Stacey. Jack believed that they were competing for him. The pure look of competitiveness in both women's eyes was breathtaking. He loved the different positions that all three of them were getting into. Bill could only watch with his mouth wide open. I don't think any of them realised such positions existed. Jack decided to make it more naughty by adding different tasks they had to complete. What he didn't know was they were secretly competing for Bill. Amber always beat Stacey when they went head to head by an inch. However ,today Stacey didn't just raise the bar ,She went above and beyond. And for the first time she beat Amber.

Tony Midwood

I just deleted two of my comments because my partner said something very interesting to me. She reminded me that this is just a story. It is not real life ,It is just fiction. And we should encourage people like Vivian and many other writers to enjoy themselves ,even if we do not totally agree with what they are writing. We are still not going to stop reading and begging for the next chapter. We can only pray that we see a lot more love between Bill and Amber. And maybe a stronger side to them both protecting each other. I still believe that being a cuck his totally different from being a wimpy cuck. Cucks kink is to watch their wife having sex with another man and in some cases videoing it and joining in. Where a wimpy cuck enjoys more being humiliated put into a chastity belt maybe not even watching. I do not see Bill as a wimpy cuck. And I hope many of the other readers agree with me. This is meant to be a fun journey and awakening within Amber and Bill's marriage. Hopefully it stays that way. But like my partner said ,it is just a story. At the end of the day it is up to the writer. And when we said about not carrying on the story. There was no disrespect meant there towards Vivian. In fact we have read all of her stories and like them all. It's just that readers do like closure. When a story drags on and on like Avid did dragging out the anniversary ,people became bored. We would hate to see this for Amber's birthday. If anything it would be nice if she finished Amber's birthday and then left it until maybe Christmas doing a Christmas special. It can reflect on what has happened during the time frame of Amber's birthday to Christmas. Maybe some reconnecting between Bill and Amber or even secret meetings who knows. I think there's only one person who has mentioned Amber's workplace. And he made that scenario absolutely fantastic. I'm sure Bill must have an office in his workplace or maybe another visit to Amber's not forgetting that Stacey's office is directly across 😁. But sometimes distance makes the heart grow fonder.. I think Bill needs time alone to process everything. Maybe going away for a day by himself. Using the internet to try and work out everything that is going on. Especially now that he knows his wife has strong feelings for another man. He needs to know can a woman of two men at the same time and can it work out. There will be many sad stories but also many happy stories. But each of them has their pros and cons. I also think if she's going to carry it on it would be nice if she set up just a column where people can write in their comments and what they like to see for the future purely for NC. A bit like Rab has done for The Bet. I think that would add a bit more of a challenge to her writing and also give more interaction of her readers. And like I said if she stopped after Amber's birthday and then said he was going to be a Christmas special it would give her a few months to be able to think about it maybe even years on with some of the other writers. You have some magnificent writers out there like bridgekicker . His description of the connection between the husband and wife in (my crude boss cuck me) is incredible. He should get an Oscar 😁. I would love to read a tag team between them both. Vivian White and Bridgekicker ,Christmas and possibly New year special. How awesome would that be. And who knows what could happen. Maybe Amber is pregnant. Maybe Jack and Stacey start a relationship. 3 months is a long time. As the famous saying goes what could possibly happen. And I'm sure that every reader would be tuned in waiting if she gave a few weeks notice that it was coming out. 🙏

Tony Midwood

Of the alternate Neighbor Chronicles stories that have been written and that have had some kind of closure with writing similar to Avid's, I think the best has been "writerinabox." And so far, I'm really liking this version by "Vivian White", I'll see what kind of closure she gives this arc to decide if it's my favorite version of NC. Another version that was doing well was the one by the author "Envoyeur," but she's forgotten about it, just like the original author. Also, why push Amber and Bill's boundaries until they break? Is that necessary to keep reading future installments of NC? I see that they're taking the necessary precautions so that this cuckolding relationship doesn't ruin their lives. Amber and Bill are talking about their feelings, and that's very good in this lifestyle. They both also continue to enjoy the sex they have and have it often, which is another good sign. And another important point in this version is that the "bull" that is Jack understands his place in this dynamic and doesn't want to take Amber away from Bill (like what happens in Toxic Attraction, for example). And Jack in this version as Stacey said is not a "bad guy". On the other hand, Jack has protected Amber and Bill from a bastard like David, who could have screwed up their lives and, consequently, their relationship. Or when Jack realized his mistake of sharing Amber with Chester (a dangerous guy) and Jack learned his lesson, that's another way of protecting her as well. I think in this version, many precautions are being taken to make this lifestyle work for them. And I also think that even though Bill is a cuckold, that doesn't mean he's any less of a man or that he's a wimp. Added to all this, there are no major reasons for Amber to leave Bill for Jack other than sex. Jack isn't "husband material," and he's just over fifty. And even if Amber is getting Jack to eat better or even get him to exercise with her (aside from the sex they have), Jack will have fifteen or at most twenty years left if he takes good care of himself. Author Vivian White, with her story "Cuckold Consequences," also shows what happens if the cuckolding lifestyle isn't handled properly. So I see no reason why the author couldn't write new story arcs or plots after Amber's Birthday Weekend.

Arthas17

Tony Midwood

Maybe the best sex jack is getting isn't now. However he believes it is. If only he could see his future. After amber's birthday Jack and Amber Bill and Stacy all meet up a few more times for different events. All of them slowly beginning to feel more comfortable with the role that they are playing. The biggest event is the Christmas hospital function. Bill he not totally happy that Jack has been invited. It is fancy dress and Jack looks pretty impressive as Santa Claus. Amber and Stacy are his elves. And poor Bill is his reindeer. There's a lot of drinking eating laughing and dancing. At the beginning of the night Amber is 100% focused on bill because of her work colleagues. But soon as a drink begins to hit her she finds herself more and more dancing with Jack. Not that anybody really cares They are all drunk and Stacy is dancing a lot with Bill. Bill becomes a bit concerned when Jack and Amber disappear for nearly an hour. The end of the night is coming and all four of them know what that means they have agreed that Amber will go back to Jack's with him and Stacy will go with Bill. Jack had taken an extra lot of Viagra he wanted to make sure he blew Amber's mind and body as a Christmas present. Amber also has some very new sexy underwear especially for Jack. They said they goodbyes and just as Jack and Amber are getting down to it Jack can feel his heart pounding in his chest. Amber realises something is wrong immediately calling the ambulance. See also realises that the ambulance service is going to be forming a hospital it cannot see her like this. See Cole spell and Stacey will come over Bill will stay with Jack while Amber and Stacey stay at the house. The ambulance turns up . Amber quickly gets changed and jumps in the ambulance with Jack. He has had a heart attack. Jack confesses to taking too many blue pills. A few weeks pass before Jack is released. Amber feeling guilty because she knew about his heart condition and because of her new feels for Jack takes it upon herself to be his personnel Doctor and carer. Helping to wash and clean him and his house.Bill understands feeling guilty himself. Over the next few months amber is sleeping every other night at Jack's. They was no sex to begin with. However there connection grow. And because of jack's condition they cannot fuck like they use too instead they make soft slow love. It is a new experience for Jack and Amber really making slow love. Especially with amber been incharge. Bill would come and check on thinks every day. He was still getting sex from amber and even Stacey was helping Bill. Sometimes staying at his. Jack been jack wanted amber to spend more time with him. Even tricking her into removing her wedding ring. It gives him pain when she massage him he told her. Which he needed twice a daily. The evil amber disappeared and the kind caring amber took over. Could you picture Bill's face when by accident seeing amber without her wedding ring. She had got so used to taking it off at Jack's She forgot to put it back on. Bill feeling left out and having an arguement with Amber turns to Stacey. Amber feeling guilty that night leaves Jack fast asleep she goes over to see Bill to make up but finds him fast asleep in bed cuddled up with Stacey. The bedroom smelled sweat and sex. Amber realises that to be her not Stacey. See it's spent so much time with Jack see you neglected her own husband who she loved more than anyone or anything in the world. Even jacks humongous cock. She promised herself to reconnect with her husband once Jack is better. Realising that the choice to end things had never been bills it had always been hers. In the past she wasn't 100% sure she could. That is why she had left it to Bill. She was too weak to make that decision. But now as she realises she could slowly be losing bill and Stacey She knows she has to do something.

Tony Midwood


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