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Ch 7 release date

Ali is live

Thanks! I tried to strike a balance between content and story. Good to know it worked!

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Yeah, I am currently working on another scene between them. However, I dont want to jump into sex initially. It's going to progress over a few more acts before Lilith cant hold herself back. Most of which will happen when he is asleep.

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This isn't a criticism, it's more a personal taste. But I preferred that there really was a sex scene between the nurse and the protagonist, while he was sleeping. It wouldn't be relevant for the story, and it would be a nice fanservice

Yuki-chan1156

I liked the pacing of the story, a problem I see with a lot of 3D comics is that they're too slow, and they focus too much on things that aren't relevant to the reader.

Yuki-chan1156

Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed them! I wasn't really sure if adding more plot than lewd content would function but it seems to be going well! Regarding the drugs I agree fully. I jumped the gun with the initial feminization process. However, I will be slowing it down. Each subsequent change shall be smaller and only one part of the body.

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Love the 4 chapters so far! Pacing is nice where it's moving along fast but still with a lot of substance to the story and feminization. Lilith is a lot of fun with how she's manipulating Leon into becoming more girly and I love the deception! Only critique is maybe have the drug injections take effect more slowly. I like hormones in feminization stories but don't think it needs to instantly give him boobs, hips etc.

Ahh... True, I was a bit hasty on that. I'll just put it off as the serum being freshly injected. I currently have a new scene where he will only get aroused but not orgasm from it. Thanks for the feedback!

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I think you might be rushing a tad on the transformation & him immediately getting breast orgasms, maybe a slower burn would be better as it feels WEIRD how one sting, and BOOM he's not getting boob orgasms, ya know?

Hado