Business Casual | Page 24 | Process
Added 2019-07-30 15:38:09 +0000 UTCMy original sketch was the first panel, they were facing right, the second having them more facing the viewer, and then getting to the pussy shot and fucking shot. I figured that the 2nd panel front-on would ease the transition to them facing to the left for the final shot, but the refined sketch ended up having them still facing a bit to the right. And that felt a little awkward, so I just flipped the top two panels horizontally, and that made me feel better.
Then I inked them with Vanessa's hair facing the wrong way. But my brain wasn't workin' so good at that point, so I didn't catch it until afterwards...
Comments
I'll have to keep on drawing the groping to get even better at it! Thank you very much :)
Meesh
2019-08-01 00:07:11 +0000 UTCI know it's a lot of work to put these process images together. I appreciate them greatly. You deliver on the minor details that make these sex scenes the best out there. For instance the pacing over the last few pages, the groping, and something as simple as undressing. Keep it up man!
Richard Awesome
2019-07-31 20:49:17 +0000 UTCI tweaked that last angle to challenge myself a bit, since I felt that the straight-on view I originally sketched was a bit too simple. All around I'm trying to practice dynamic angles to enhance sex scenes. :) Glad you're liking the process images!
Meesh
2019-07-31 16:42:03 +0000 UTCThe changes to the compositions in this give it more consistency with Vanessa staying on the left side. Also It feels like the expressions are a bit more subdued giving her a more entranced feeling~ That last panel in particular feels MUCH more unique with the angle you went with as opposed to the sketch which, while definitely dynamic, gives maybe a bit too much emphasis to Luis's THRUST. (making it feel more like a continuous pounding rather than one good plunge) These are always really fun to study ^w^
Ponpokora
2019-07-31 11:49:54 +0000 UTC
