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[A Fractured Song] - Chapter 75 - Fantasy, Isekai (Portal Fantasy), Adventure
Added 2020-11-10 22:18:44 +0000 UTCSorry for the late upload, I'm working a graveyard (basically evening to morning) shift this month and needed sleep. It'll just be for this month :)
Comments
The missing fingers was mentioned.
vren55
2020-11-19 17:28:15 +0000 UTCThe part about missing fingers sounds weird. Was this mentioned before? If it was, no need for parenthesis. Maybe I'm used to POV narration but I'd expect it in a form of "Frances/Ayax realised that she was missing two fingers". Also, missing two fingers but having 7 total seems like an error.
Faiir
2020-11-17 19:21:21 +0000 UTC
