The Sixth School. Chapter 018.
Added 2023-05-31 07:53:57 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Eighteen.
As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Believe me when I tell you that your corrections are VERY MUCH appreciated. I try to edit my work to the best of my ability, but as you can see I don't always catch everything. To have a second pair of eyes look over my work and point to me what I've missed is just godsent as far as I am concerned.
BlaQQuill
2023-05-31 14:47:46 +0000 UTCHope I'm not being annoying with the corrections. I have to say you sure are making our guy's first boss battle a bit tougher than expected!
Murky
2023-05-31 14:45:02 +0000 UTCSorry about that first error. It's the autocorrect on my phone. Although foe is a legitimate word, it usually changes it to 'for' and I don't know why. With the second correction, I think both tenses can apply.
BlaQQuill
2023-05-31 14:41:23 +0000 UTCThink this sentence is missing a word: "Unfortunately for the bisons, their for was underground." And should bellow be bellowed here? "As such, even though they were worked up and ready for a fight, all they could do was impotently paw at the ground while they bellow in indignation."
Murky
2023-05-31 14:36:47 +0000 UTC
