The Sixth School. Chapter 039.
Added 2023-10-05 01:12:01 +0000 UTCHi guys,
Here is Chapter Thirty Nine.
Things are slowly getting back on track. Chapters will be more regular. Sorry for the delay on this one.
As always, please do take the time to give me your feedback. It means a lot to me.
Enjoy.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
Which aspect of the healer's personality in particular did you feel was off?
BlaQQuill
2023-10-05 07:44:32 +0000 UTCAnother good chapter, nice pacing overall to buildup the world, personalities and the challenges Greg faces. I only found the description of the supposed interaction with the healer a bit too circumspect. I get that you're primarily trying to showcase the healer's focus, but still. Other than that, I think I found a mistake. "Greg knew that his mother was confused and wondering hurt he usually got the meat seeing as he rarely went hunting anymore."
VT
2023-10-05 07:41:13 +0000 UTC
