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Added 2016-04-11 03:50:03 +0000 UTCDuane and Sette's conversation is almost twice as long in the script, and necessitated a lot of paring down for the comic. There was a lot of lore dump that, while interesting, wasn't ultimately necessary and could be better placed in the future. Some of it was also a little rambly.
If I was writing this as prose I would have allowed Duane much more page time to ruminate over Delicieu's cryptic ranting and all that he saw and heard last night. Instead I just had those shots of his journal scribbles implying he'd been sitting there stewing over it all. All that plotty stuff's important, but not as important as his relationship with Sette, so it got priority in this scene. And here come Jivi and Matty at last.
Comics are hard!
Comments
im just glad they have reason to smile again
Robert S
2016-04-11 23:24:12 +0000 UTCI feel like trimming away the excess conversation would be my biggest struggle if I ever got a comic going and your ability to tell a concise and yet incredibly compelling story continues to astound. In other news, I love Duane's face too much. <3
Parrott
2016-04-11 16:22:41 +0000 UTCOMG that "I missed it" panel... :D
Jeremy Ball
2016-04-11 10:13:17 +0000 UTC
