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Added 2017-03-15 03:52:52 +0000 UTCI gave myself a lot of challenging angles on this page. It's always fun to think up strategies for laying out conversations that keep your eye moving around in interesting ways. It's fun to let the kids' personalities come out too, as they talk. Sette authoritatively kicking her way through the water. Matty very carefully climbing down the ladder. Jivi skeptical of everyone except his little plat buddy, whom he unconsciously puts an arm out in front of in the last panel. They are good kids, even if they don't all like each other at the moment.
Comments
I'm just gonna lay down in this page. The dialogue, body language, and topic is so good! I want that top right frame of Sette as merch, js Ashley...
Brenna
2017-03-20 01:30:53 +0000 UTCCause he would have lost his fist?
Jeremy Ball
2017-03-15 11:50:05 +0000 UTCAfter the last panel of the last page, I thought Jivi is going to punch Duane in the face. I wonder why he didn't..
Martin
2017-03-15 11:17:46 +0000 UTC
