Minnow's dialogue was an interesting challenge. She speaks perfectly fluent Continental - standard west Crescian accent - but she hasn't had a conversation with a human in probably forty years so she needed to sound a bit stilted. Not ancient and wise; not terribly idiosyncratic or accented; but stilted.
The little touches were fun, like "gone" instead of "dead" in reference to the dead soldiers and "long thoughts" to describe souls.
Duane's hand is still wrong and it wounds me.
Ashley
2018-03-23 16:37:49 +0000 UTCKristian
2018-03-23 16:26:51 +0000 UTCBrenna
2018-03-23 13:51:49 +0000 UTC