Ch14_2-4
Added 2019-02-15 04:25:05 +0000 UTCUpdating with three pages today, make sure you check the attachments for the other two.
I've had a lot of requests for a really detailed map of continent Kasslyne and while this is only Alderode, I did want to do something of that vein for this chapter. One day I'll do a really nice one of the entire world, with cities and senet beasts all snarled around the borders.
Anyway, I warned you I was going to break some rules this chapter! I've always tried to refrain from exposition dumps, but I saw no way around it here. And it seems okay since it's Duane talking, and not me narrating like a GM.
Anyone care to guess who the kid is on the third page? We've met him before, though he was much older there.
Comments
He needs to discover something that causes the scales to fall from his eyes when it comes to the men pulling the strings in his beloved Alderode...
2019-02-25 06:27:59 +0000 UTCWow!! Even with a biased-as-hell narrator (nice nationalism, Duane), I was definitely on the side of the rebels from the get-go.
2019-02-25 05:56:06 +0000 UTCHe hasn't been challenged enough, honestly. But we'll fix that.
Ashley
2019-02-17 03:47:18 +0000 UTCIs Duane ever going to realize what an absolutist warmongering prig he is, and be humbled by his after-life second chance to make good? I love him, but jeez.
czytanie
2019-02-17 03:38:25 +0000 UTC
