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Added 2019-03-08 04:50:55 +0000 UTCI'm about forty pages ahead of this one, and these old pages keep wigging me out because I keep thinking I've forgotten the cut Lem gets across his face between now and then.
You're generally not supposed to show a character looking directly into the "camera" - it kind of takes you out of the action and breaks the line of sight - but I feel like sometimes it's effective if you DO want to make the reader stop for a sec and look in the character's eyes and really see them. I like that one panel of wide-eyed Lemuel looking at you intent but vulnerable.
We'll do two pages on Monday.
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Skwehwehweh is officially my favourite sound today ππ
bookworm
2019-03-08 07:25:10 +0000 UTCI gotta say, in real life I find people who keep their eyes so wide open that the white shows all around the iris, just plain creepy. That Bela Lugosi Dracula stare just doesn't go with everyday life.
akrasia
2019-03-08 07:14:01 +0000 UTC
