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Added 2019-03-20 03:54:07 +0000 UTCDuane eavesdropping on the kids and smirking at their conversation is very on point for him. And Will tags along for the cremations because even the Spellmaster and his Plats are less scary than all the other soldiers D:
In the original script I had Duane saying a prayer over the bottom three panels: "Ssael, we defy this god-befouled world and its indignities as you defied them. Show this man the way to you and share your victory. "
But I wound up cutting this whole scene way down.
Comments
Worked out fine without the dialogue.
Jeremy Ball
2019-03-20 11:00:53 +0000 UTCIn Panel 3? Sure looks like a smirk to me. A subtle lil smirk.
Stephanie Aldrich
2019-03-20 06:56:55 +0000 UTC
