Sneak Peek of the Introduction to the OA Amicus Brief
Added 2020-06-06 03:55:36 +0000 UTCCheck out our statement of interest and introduction! Comments welcome.
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Ok from the updates I see this changed a lot. I’ll refrain from that kind of grammatical suggestion until the very end
Crockpot
2020-06-07 12:40:48 +0000 UTCNitpick from a layperson who doesn’t know how these things are done typically: the very last sentence says “a criminal defendant that” but I think it should be “a criminal defendant who” since he is still (probably) a human person. Could also be “whom” since he’s the subject of that lesser clause but part of the object of the sentence as a whole. Never been great about that.
Crockpot
2020-06-07 12:38:31 +0000 UTCAs a lay person, footnote at best, I don't think it adds anything to your credibility, as the author of the Amicus brief.
Dan from Deerfield
2020-06-07 03:00:09 +0000 UTC
