Complete Rewrite of Brockton Bay's Marvelous Mage
Added 2024-04-30 23:31:41 +0000 UTCAfter a lot of consideration and debate, I have finally decided to rewrite BBMM. I was disappointed in several aspects of the story, unhappy with my direction, and unhappy with how the power was working. Everything that was voted for will stay the same, as will the voting system for the bonus charge, but huge swaths of the story will change. Expect rewritten chapters to come out in bulk on the second and the seventh.
I do want to apologize for the cluster fuck this story has been so far, but I am excited by the new version. I look forward to seeing what everyone thinks on Thursday.
I will be deleting the old chapters so that someday I may forget they exist, so if you want to keep hold of them, the clock is ticking.
Comments
I'm looking forward to seeing the rewrite when it comes out. It takes guts to take a project down and restart it. I respect that! I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
Phil Meyering
2024-05-01 03:18:47 +0000 UTCI'm okay with this. If you're not happy then you should take you time(which it seems like you have) and evaluate what you want to do to fix it. I saw take you time, no point in rushing to another point where your not satisfied.
RegularReplacement
2024-04-30 23:57:04 +0000 UTCMaybe try a different character basis? Most of your MC’s seem like pretty similar people, maybe make this one like… a cat or something? You *are* playing with high magic this time, you can have fun with it
Danielle
2024-04-30 23:34:19 +0000 UTC
