Chapter 4 part 2 - Celestial Ascendant
Added 2026-02-15 20:26:04 +0000 UTCComments
Yeh, glad you liked it. I had such a plot line in mind for a while but was unsure when to introduce. Through them, a lighter and more fun and also worldbuilding scenic story is written. Otherwise I think the story can get too bogged down without a bit of heart seen in characters.
Mosef
2026-02-16 11:36:22 +0000 UTCThanks :)
Mosef
2026-02-16 11:34:38 +0000 UTCYeh, Thel and the Covvies are finding out they're not the big dogs on the block anymore, a lesson they wont accept until they are hammered with it. Also I'm kinda sad I had to do Thel like that. Unfortunately for him.
Mosef
2026-02-16 11:34:31 +0000 UTCYeh, I kind of agree. It's sad but tbh, they do have a point. It's hard to be interested in other civs in the galaxy when they're so...well mundane. Mundane in nature and mundane in motivations. Conquest, expansion, self superiority. Interacting with these civs generally means the magicals would have to incredibly forceful and so they'd rather just let them be ignorant of the celestials whilst at the same time keeping an eye on them.
Mosef
2026-02-16 11:31:36 +0000 UTCYes. Will correct tonight thanks
Mosef
2026-02-16 11:23:35 +0000 UTC“Supreme Commander!” the Prophet of Clarity demanded to know as he came closer to Thel, his face slackened with shock and rear “What are you doing?!” I assume that is supposed to be *fear*?
Acrs1
2026-02-16 00:49:32 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, it's kind of understandable that the celestials aren't really interested in a mundane galaxy but it's still a bit sad
Randydandy
2026-02-16 00:01:02 +0000 UTCAh, and here we have our intrepid explorer. Off to scour the stars in search of adventure and excitement. I literally can’t wait for him to. Sort of like a guy going to Star Wars galaxy to see all the sights even if not in wealth. I look forward to it. Will his first forays be human? Or is that too much a hotbox with all the observations on them. Probably some other species.
Robolo42
2026-02-15 22:06:47 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Thomas Buckley
2026-02-15 21:52:17 +0000 UTCPoor Thel, there really wasn’t any good way out of that situation. Its fun seeing all the little dominoes being set in motion, the prophet being let go, the senator creating a block against seers, the young explorers attempting to leave illegally, all of it hints at a much larger design on the part of Atticus and Emily. Greatly looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds. As always thank you for the chapter!
Hello
2026-02-15 21:28:27 +0000 UTC
