Update time!
Added 2025-06-16 10:08:12 +0000 UTCOkay, so this week was more productive then the last. However I’m focusing more on rewriting then adding additional work for myself. This way, I can focus more on continuing the story and adding to the story later.
Things still needing to be added:
Love at first sight (I’ll add this in the future but not rn)
Add Banter Options. (This will be added upon the completion of the rewrite.)
Goals completed:
Rewrote atleast 8K words.
Deleted at least 4K+ words.
Added at least 2K+ words.
Book is now at 25K words (Original starting point was 31K words)
Which means I only have 10K words to rewrite. I’m going to try and finish that up here and now.
My main focus has been eliminating MC’s personal dialogue that would usually either be
A) Rude
B) Useless
C) Is information that can be revealed in other ways.
Ofc, to compensate, I’m adding more options for the readers to react the way they want, which, not only increases the stat, but also adds more flavor to the text if the opposing stat is higher.
Goals to be completed next week:
Finish up chapter 2 and move onto chapter 3.
I kinda got lost in chapter 4, and by that I mean I was so surprised that I wrote it cause of how good it was, so I’ve decided that the rewriting will stop at chapter 3, and then I’ll move onto chapter 5.2! Thanks again for all the support you guys!!
