Update time! THIS ONE’S GONNA BE A LOOOOOONG ASS UPDATE AND I APOLOGIZE!

Chapter 2.3 is now updated on Patreon and I’ve already started to work on chapter 3!

Things that have changed in this rewrite SO FAR.

The introduction has been entirely scraped off.

The pendant inherently tries to help the MC in every way and Adrian, the owner of the Pendant is also helping out the MC in every way that he/she can in the earlier chapters. There will be more that you will hear from him/her in chapter 3 as well!

MC shouldn’t be very mad at Blaine for no reason (If you guys do see something like that, please do point that out to me)

MC shouldn’t look edgy any more for no reason and should feel as if they’re more dependable.

Stoic option should minimize almost all of MC’s dialogues into stone cold and silent brooding type.

I haven’t reached chapter 3 yet but I’m trying to make it so that any poly route happens through MC. V does flirt with everyone, but as I said before, He/she’d flirt with a rock so he/she’s a special case (Belongs in a psyche ward special case) so they’re an exemption.

Blaine shouldn’t be too touchy touchy with the MC (I also made it so that the scene where Blaine was asking if they’d like to go for a date only occurs if MC accepts Blaine. Instead you will encounter building more friendship with Vigil)

Blaine would not hug an MC unless they’re RO or if they are asked not to hug even with an RO (Please point out if this is still an issue)

Nathan did love Natasha however distance caused them to grow apart and he moved on with his wife (MC’s mother) and had a happier life with her. MC’s mother is now amazing and not someone that wasn’t in MC’s life.

I don’t know why but my stupid ass made it write the MC’s inner dialogue that went against the choice sometimes. E.g (MC chooses to be against Blaine. Inner dialogue: “Wow, why am I an asshole?” This has been changed and I’m so SO sorry. As a punishment I shall do around 3 days of intense leg work out (It’s not like I do anything else lmao)

The football scene with Blaine has entirely been scraped off. It was, in the beginning, supposed to be a short story for Blaine but I added it into the book. I’ll be putting it on the short stories list (But it’s on the backburner for now) so yeah, Patreoners should not see it and I’ll also delete it in public in a week’s time when I update the book.

I would also like to point out that English isn’t my first language and even though I’ve gotten a better grip, there are slangs/words that aren’t the words I think they are (So if you feel like something’s weird or doesn’t belong here, do tell me >.<)

Goals for this rewrite:

The doctor has some kind of issue. Idk why but the MC blushes (Or does something similar) even when the reader chooses the option to like the DR. (Will be implementing in chapter 3’s rewrite.)

Add more Adrian interactions in chapter 3.

I already made a shy MC make M grow bolder so if any one does try to flirth with M/MC they’re going to get angry and stand up. (Will be implementing that in chapter 3’s rewrite)

I do need feedback on the Doctor, the flaws, what ya’ll like or didn’t like etc. Don’t care about being rude or anything, any feedback is appreciated.

I would also like any and all feedback and the changes you’d like to see in the book. I will be adding all these changes with the rewrite.

This is a final rewrite btw and there won’t be any rewrite after this until I finish the entire book.

So yeah! I aim to please, unfortunately, my aim is not very good ;-;