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Sky Pride Vol. 5 Chapter 43- The Princess Pierces the Sky

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I think the point is that Tian is mostly over this tea. No one waxes poetically over Lipton. But sometimes that's what you have and it gets the job done

Notcreepycreeper

I'll probably get some crap for this. The red tea description reads like the "notes" tag on tea I could buy at Walmart. Your previous descriptions of tea, even the bad ones, offered mystery. Even if there wasn't much to work with, there was a possibility that the tea was something more. No more tea descriptions without wonder!

Jesse

Oh that would be hilarious. Tian and elegant domineering daughter and Liren and her arrogant materialistic son

Michael Grable

I did, fixed

Nonnyor Business

You know... every chapter has the same mistake. They keep ending way too soon. MOAR please.

E G Jameson

I think you messed up and wrote Liren when you started with Lin. It's when Lin first comes over.

Endgame

"Tian smiled a little, flicking his long hair out like wings." ->like...with his hands? Reaching behind his back or up to his head? Does he have hair control now? I dont think you could simultaneously flick hair out to both sides with just a head movement. Really enjoyed the chapter.

Gardor

Oddly specific guess for a small part of the next chapter: the toad gives Liren a gift and/or the toad and Liren immediately get along great, as she has a good taste in things. Which further infuriates Tian, but because everything is so new with Liren, he has to pretend the toad is great too, as the toad continues to look down on tian for being broke lol

Hoopsterben

The name for their trio was also the Burning Heaven Cranes in book 4

Diarmuid McGinnity

Is the number of tribulations significant?

Sol

So does the pet comment mean that the Toads not gonna start talking one day? Because so far Tian hasn't won an argument against it as is. Lol

Abhi

Waiting before breaking through to the heavenly realm. Not before the mental breakthrough with Lin.

Robert Mullins

Why did Lin say that the Crane wanted to wait for both Tian and Liren to be there if the Crane just did it anyway without Liren ?

CentaureHeart

"Liren came in and found" - should be Lin. But also hell yeah but those Heavens your highness!

Al

Liren would not be happy to find Tian half nekkid while Lin is visiting. Good thing he's aware.

EvilLittleThing

“It is important to let people know where they stand in the pecking order. But also, it’s all of us.” The “Burning” part refers to liren and “heaven” refers to tian. I know that their relationship isn’t exactly a Parent-child relationship, but Warby can’t help but make it seem like one

Mobb

Poor brother Mao is already dead, we don't need to have a crane T pose on his corpse!

William Johnson

And should "Brother Crane" perhaps be "Sister Crane"?

Anon.

Does that mean she has the same family name as Zihao?

Anon.

I think that stems from Warby's decision to keep the story so tightly focused on Tian's pov. (outside of epilogue chapters anyway) He's not privy to what's actually happening with the crane in that moment so neither are we. It's not the first time the author has "offscreened" a major event for a side character. An intentional writing decision, though one you're perfectly free to criticize.

JackassofAllTrades

"Liren came in and found Tian sitting on a stool, sliding on his shoes." Think this is supposed to say Lin.

JackassofAllTrades

I'm usually the last to complain about the lack of neeedless bells and whistles in a scene. As they are a great way to kill te pace of a story. But crane going sapient has been sufficiently built up that it deserves some lights and noise, some gravity. Just taking her from 0 to 1 with no fanfare seems underwhelming.

SlaveToMyWhims

I like the Crane. Also what a hell of a sentence to end the chapter on, in the best possible way

G&S Gaming

Possible they're doing the disciples in batches and Liren's in another batch.

Robert Mullins

Liren should be lin I think, when she enters

s476

"Liren came in and found Tian sitting on a stool, sliding on his shoes." - Did you mean Lin? Liren doesn't show up until the end of the chapter from what I can see.

Aaron

Burning Heaven! I’m so excited for everyone to meet up again. Also I hope Tian never stops beefing with the Toad

Mistythread

tftc

Samuel Sever

The crane missed out on the sect discussion, she could have looked very domineering after Tian trashed Mao

Joshua Flowers

So... fourth tribulation coming up, right?

Robert Mullins

The chapter title made me expect something quite different... though I'm very happy with what we got!

Sam

Burning Heaven and Tian are true siblings

Joshua Flowers

Tian's going to be at LEAST twice as smug when Craneposing

Desert Rainbow

Yay! Liren is back! ...Why was she excluded from the big discussion, I wonder?

Logrus

This chapter is peak humor! The pet that drinks tea, burning heaven, and Liren in a cloud of butterflies. Love it!

JTP

How dare it end here. I demand more!!

Trasen56

Another step towards making the dream come true

Josiah Elliott

"He looked like he was painted into the scene, naturally a part of it, yet unworldly. " Eukphrasis in MY cultivation novel? Scandalous.

Andrew Goebel

Ooh, this is the cover art thing. The butterflies. Time to see what fortunate encounter she had while tian was playing Minecraft

Robert Mullins

Spoiled toad. Hopefully it earns it's keep, the little begger.

Andrew Lechner

I would kill anyone and everyone for Sister Burning heavens.

Aadi Narayan

Let's go! Burning Heaven for the win!!!

Cameron Bacon


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