24/08 Commission #7
Added 2024-09-01 12:09:13 +0000 UTCFor Parfait!
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Oh it's fine to me, I just like to help with translating for non American native people, I've helped one with it before, you have me added on Discord, if you ever need me to help you out translating feel free to just drop an image in and I'll work my magic for you for free
Jokerthejester
2024-09-01 13:07:16 +0000 UTComg I didn't even notice the errors xD (even my client too) bad news is that I didn't save the layers of those texts, thought everything's okay ;w; I'll upload textless versions instead if that's okay ;w; sry for the troubles
Fermus Boi
2024-09-01 12:55:58 +0000 UTCGorgeous, your Absol is a pretty male~
Galdra_Absol
2024-09-01 12:50:04 +0000 UTCRest of it looks clear though
Jokerthejester
2024-09-01 12:17:05 +0000 UTCFor the first page, the text for them saying "cuite" should be retranslated to "cutie" For the last page, the text for them saying "it's been a while isn't it?" should be retranslated to "it's been awhile, hasn't it?" and "I'll feed you until you couldn't take it anymore" should be retranslated to "I'll feed(or fill optionally, depends on what they wanted) you until you can't take it anymore" sorry, you didn't ask for this but I just felt like potentially helping straighten out a little
Jokerthejester
2024-09-01 12:16:52 +0000 UTC
