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New Demo is here!

The new demo for Fallen Hero: Revelations, 180 700 words, four paths, 28 000 - 35 000 words per playthrough is available for VIP Patreons!

First of all, apologies for falling off the face of the earth. I have been hyperfocusing and written almost 50 000 words in three weeks. I wanted to get this demo done for so long now, I am so utterly apprechiative of your support that this was my number one priority. And my brain finally works. It's a wonderful feeling. My mother is doing alright, slowly healing, I'll take that.

So, the demo in question is based on the earlier one, where you were stuck in your puppet body. This will be the base of future fused paths. The first one I have connected is the ending where you went with Dr. Mortum to rescue your puppet, who was hurt in the crash and stuck in the hospital. Dr. Mortum sedated you, and that is where we will pick up our story.

There is also more content at the end of the other three paths where you are stuck in your puppet. As some might have remembered we stopped at a bit of a cliffhanger there, and now it is time to discover what will happen.

The length of the demo is 180 700 words with code and 155 850 without code.

An average playthrough is around 32 100 words, varying between 28 000 and 35 000 depending on path and choices. Some of the shorter paths will have more content later, but this is the nature of a demo. I need cutoff points.

The Link to the demo is here!

Please don't share it to people who don't have access to it through Patreon, everyone will have that in about a month or so. I want this to be for you, as my personal thanks for supporting me. You're my lifeline. Life is rough for everyone right now, I hope this can at least provide some distraction.

I have also begun a project with a collaborator set in the FH world, I will let you know more details once things starts to happen. I am super excited about this, I've wanted to do this for years but haven't had the time myself. Time for Los Diablos to get some love.

Comments

I meant to post this in a more timely fashion. I enjoyed the demo, and honestly I am most fascinated by watching your process in writing through all the variable starting points. It's a Herculean effort, though it must feel Sisyphean at times! I liked the unexpected villain team-up. I'm curious if or when the MC has the same revelation about Dove's buddy being from the Farm that he does in some of the other starting points.

Paul Marzagalli

Soo gooooood

Abena

I also spotted two instances in 4.1 where Dr. Mortum's pronouns were incorrect. "You have never heard the good doctor loose it like this, but then again you know what is haunting his lab, and you get it." "You can see the frown on her face as she squints. There is a shimmmer around her glasses, is she accessing the system through them? Impossible to say, but finally he breathes a sigh of relief." And a few times where the puppet is referred to as they/them which makes sense coming from sidestep not viewing the puppet as a person and calling the body it. When Mortum mixes pronouns it kinda surprised me and might not have been intentional. "I did. It should be a while before he wakes up. It might be best to run some scans on his brain while they are sedated. The wave functions should still tell us something" That fight scene though 🫣

Sam Sporrong

Super excited to get back into this world! Gender variable bug that I assume is in the public demo as well, but sharing it here incase something has been changed. She/her getting what I assume is the they/them variable of has. Puppetstuck first interrogation with Ortega: "Why not talk to your precious (last name)? I'm sure she've told you everything by now."

Sam Sporrong


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