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Our Life 2: Serenity (Step 2)

Today we're sharing the fully colored sprite for Serenity! They're so charming 💞

And, of course, I'm at it again with my beloved green-haired characters, haha.

Our Life 2: Serenity (Step 2)

Comments

That too could be a explanation. Everything is really white compared to her dark tonality with clothes etc. so it's like if I'm getting blinded somehow XD

Cheese-And-Rice, Mooney

They're so cute! I love the cottage-core vibes with the bandana and leafy baby doll dress. (灬♥ω♥灬) I agree with everyone that her color scheme is so dark and it makes them hard to see, their blush could also go a lot darker as it's a bit hard to distinguish from their other expression which is a shame because it's so freaking cute! Their angry face looks a bit like they are about to sneeze, maybe furrow their brow and tilt their eyebrows a little more (。•̀ᴗ-)✧

Lexi

agreed, she looks great but her clothes could def be lighter, same with the hair. ngl i thought her hair was black until i zoomed in close. also her skin could use some highlights, maybe a bit of glimmer or something so it's easier to see her facial features. it's especially noticeable when i unfocus my eyes she kinda just looks like a silhouette. no hate or anything, i think her design is lovely- just could use some slight adjustments imo

zoe

Oooooh, adorable :o.

Elvenoob

A lot of this could also just be because it's on a white background - colors often look much darker on a white background than they would in-game or with a colored background.

Makayla Murray

it sounds like what you're saying is that all her clothes are low contrast, so it all blends together?

Veronica Casas-Rosales

i love the leaf pattern on the dress. I guess fall leaves are just a thing for me. I also like the leaf sticker =)

Jeremiah Mack

Like someone else said, I had to adjust my screen brightness to see her and even with that it's kinda "strange for the eye" to look at. It's cool but everything is a bit too dark (not meant as skin color) so probably something should be made lighter. I don't know how to explain it and I'm not saying to white wash her, but everything is too dark that I can't really make a "difference"? I don't even know how to explain it but all this dark scheme with the skin being already really dark makes it kinda hard to look at? It's really good but since the skin color is already really dark it's better to lighten some other things, for example the hair should be green and if I look closely I see it but if I don't get closer they look black and I can barely see the face, sometimes it look like I can't see the mouth or nose unless I get closer. I really hope it doesn't sound rude though, the character design is really good and I love it, but it's difficult to see the face or hair because everything is really really dark and since the skin tone is already dark something in the clothes should be lightened a little I think.

Cheese-And-Rice, Mooney

Green hair characters my beloved...

Hat Hatto

Yeah, we can change it!

GB Patch

We'll make some changes to the version that's in the game. Thank you!

GB Patch

Thank you for the explanation! We'll tweak the coloring in the version used in-game.

GB Patch

I can see where you're coming from. It's a great character design, but there's not much contrast to set the features apart. I wonder what they will look like against different backgrounds?

Karen

I had to adjust my screen brightness to make her out well, maybe consider brightening her dress just a little so she doesn't look so shadowed? Or highlight her hair? I am not an artist so I'm unsure how to phrase that change well. Beautiful character though, I am only offering feedback because they're all so good in this game I want every character to shine!

Shojo Says

I want hug her si hard

Mir G. Moren.

I'd at least make their dress lighter, so she doesn't look like a darkened silhouette

YonYonYon

i love how vivid their eyes look even when they're such a dark shade of green <3

ItaLii

So cute, can't wait to meet them~

standby907

Green hair supremacy yeahhh <333

HoneyBee

She reminds me of a little mouse, i love her <3

Astro Is Alive

MY BELOVED

Veth Alyssum Check

SHE IS SO CUTE I CAN'T 🤧🤧

Manine

They’re so freaking cute 🥰 my heart! Sweet bb

savannah allison

Oh her dress and jacket combo are ADORABLE

Libra Frills

She is just TOO CUTE! 🤩 And i really want that dress 🤭

Anna Bia

I am LOVING this color palette.

Malak

Agreed with Lunar above me! A lot of her cute lil features are getting totally lost in the darkness of the palette. As a dark-skinned lady, I love to see us represented, but the highlights and stuff have to be right or we just end up looking flat in a lot of art.

tiltowhirl

Because of the colour pallet, I'd personally would make her hair a lil bit more vibrant/brighter, just so the lines would show up a tad more. But thats me personally (Or just my computer screen), she's adorable otherwise! Her dress is so cute!

Lunar Chaos

this is my best friend now

bec

SHE'S ADORABLE OH MY GOD I LOVE HER

skylarsblue

they are so freakin' pretty!!

VerlysGamingLife

Green has always been my favorite color! She looks great ^^

Pandora Peace

every new sprite you share is just another child I plan on adopting XD

nanowatzophina

I'm going to friend everyone in this game SO HARD 😤

Rhayne

Welp, time to protect this sweet baby child too.

GoryPawz

Their dress... she is so cuuuuute

Emma

I love the diversity youre showing us ^^ thank you!

Nykomi

Baby!!! 🥺🥺🥺

Calysha B

MY BLACK BABY

kionsnuts

green haired is the best! xD She's lovely! <3

Saki-hime

Cute!

Sara

HER SKIN IS SO DARK AND THEY HAVE A NICE DRESS AND SHE'S SO.... THEY'RE SO... ADORABLE

Pixxyofice

I LOVE THEIR HAIR SO MUCH OMGGG🥺

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