EXODUS Volume VIII - Page 05 - Sketch
Added 2022-01-12 20:15:17 +0000 UTCI think you'll find this page very interesting... hehehe... :)
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Comments
HAHAHA Yes, SOTABIRUE moves A LOT of books! :D
David Cantero
2022-01-15 14:33:45 +0000 UTCI totally understand Euribatos' magnificent muscles. He's a warrior. But Sotabirue has an awesome physique, too. He must be handling VERY weighty tomes.
Werner
2022-01-13 18:08:44 +0000 UTCThanks, Jarrod! ;) I will post a note about corrections! Thanks again! XXX
David Cantero
2022-01-13 13:56:17 +0000 UTCSexy Sota. Love that Al's blushing after his naughty dream. Corrections if you want them. The word 'did' makes the sentence past tense, so you don't need to use a past tense verb after that in the same sentence. So panel 2 should say 'did you manage...' and panel 4 should say 'Did she say anything?' And since they haven't mentioned the monster directly, panel 2 should probably say 'you burned that monster,' but it's up to you.
Jarrod
2022-01-13 09:28:36 +0000 UTC
