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EXODUS Volume VIII - Page 05 - Sketch

I think you'll find this page very interesting... hehehe... :)

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EXODUS Volume VIII - Page 05 - Sketch

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HAHAHA Yes, SOTABIRUE moves A LOT of books! :D

David Cantero

I totally understand Euribatos' magnificent muscles. He's a warrior. But Sotabirue has an awesome physique, too. He must be handling VERY weighty tomes.

Werner

Thanks, Jarrod! ;) I will post a note about corrections! Thanks again! XXX

David Cantero

Sexy Sota. Love that Al's blushing after his naughty dream. Corrections if you want them. The word 'did' makes the sentence past tense, so you don't need to use a past tense verb after that in the same sentence. So panel 2 should say 'did you manage...' and panel 4 should say 'Did she say anything?' And since they haven't mentioned the monster directly, panel 2 should probably say 'you burned that monster,' but it's up to you.

Jarrod


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