Creating Jane mode - Part 56
Added 2021-03-26 19:14:21 +0000 UTC
I am working in the inking and color of ETA's duel right now. But I am already thinking about the last duel with the doctor.
I did this sketch with both them together, this would the draw instance of the duel. What do you think? Too big? And the proportions?
The muscle idol story will have my biggest girls ever. They will have some crazy growths on the 4th issue.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:22:07 +0000 UTC
You are completely right, I noticied that now!
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:19:04 +0000 UTC
Oh, yeah. Their bodies will have lots of detais.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:18:01 +0000 UTC
Thanks!
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:17:22 +0000 UTC
The big feet and hands are this way to make their body functional. A giant and heavy character must(or should) have large feet to accomodate the weight and give stability, make it harder to knock it down.
BUT, we have to keep them sexy and make the muscles looks huge. Bigger hands makes the muscles to look smaller. Choices, choices....
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:17:15 +0000 UTC
Well, you are right, but its somewhat close. A mini-Kaiju.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:12:32 +0000 UTC
Got it.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:11:53 +0000 UTC
Against the doctor.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:11:26 +0000 UTC
I used a proportion similar to the hulk. But, yes, they are a bit excessive.
ReddyHeart
2021-03-29 13:11:10 +0000 UTC
Personally, I LOOOOVE these proportions you have for them. They definitely look like their behaving hulkishly!
I love how inhumanly big their body parts are, itβs not an exaggeration to call them monsters. So I love how they just charge at each other like inexperienced/clumsy fighters, emphasizes their monsterhood!
I honestly hope you do more stuff like this in the future, and I know itβs a stretch and a lot to ask for but I hope we see some of this stuff in Muscle Idol, especially for Rita and Jenny! ππ
SomeWow
2021-03-29 06:30:50 +0000 UTC
I prefer smaller hands/feet. Make the muscles seem bigger
MGS-and-M
2021-03-28 03:26:38 +0000 UTC
they are massive!
Gwahar
2021-03-27 14:23:49 +0000 UTC
Well, Jane is just gonna have to get bigger then. But to big? Never. Portions seem fine. Just hope the definition and vascularity more pronounced is there the bigger they get. Love it so far!
1289dude
2021-03-27 08:29:09 +0000 UTC
Nice, I love it :3
Pixelpapst
2021-03-27 01:10:27 +0000 UTC
I guess I'll be the first to break from the majority comments so far and say that I think the huge hands and proportions do a good job of conveying just how absolutely enormous both women must be.
When you get to a certain size it becomes really difficult to show that "this time, they're EVEN BIGGER!" without exaggerating the proportions to a pretty large degree, and that's what you've done here. So yeah I think you've done a good job of showing the hugeness with this sketch. They definitely look monstrously big, that's for sure, especially with the Mako and things in the background there too!
The Alternate202
2021-03-26 21:14:14 +0000 UTC
If they're supposed to be like Kaiju I would say not big enough!
Ranger Fan
2021-03-26 21:10:31 +0000 UTC
As already mentioned, hands and feet are outsized and not appropriate.
2021-03-26 20:10:04 +0000 UTC
Is this Jane and ETA or Jane and Doctor?
Boboy
2021-03-26 20:04:45 +0000 UTC
I'm certainly on the same opinion as the others that the hands and feet look weirdly proportioned but the overall look/concept is great :)
Something else I think might be fun would be if at least one of the other ladies were in the frame (like on the sidelines) to give a sense of just how BIG Jane and the Doctor have gotten :)
Anthurak
2021-03-26 19:39:07 +0000 UTC
Kinda weird because I thought their hand big because of distance but they actually as 4x of its head, would argue it need more polish but the idea is looking great so far
Fblue
2021-03-26 19:33:29 +0000 UTC
I agree that the proportions between hands, feet and the rest of their bodies do look a little off. The overall premise is solid however. :D
Klesk Vadrigaar
2021-03-26 19:29:05 +0000 UTC
Looks twofold
On the one hand, everything is logical, two pumped women fight in one frame, everything should look like this according to the plot
On the other, hands and feets looks very strange, they are too big (maybe it's just because it's just a sketch), but for now it looks like a fight between two burned people with incredibly huge palms and strange foot shapes.
Again, this is what I see. Maybe others have a different perception
Falkoirm
2021-03-26 19:25:51 +0000 UTC
I swear to Yeezus this gonna end up as a freaking hulk-brawl, which is a very good thing
J-Leaf
2021-03-26 19:19:58 +0000 UTC
It's a battle between two kaiju like woman i think it's never too big
charles yve antoine capel
2021-03-26 19:18:48 +0000 UTC