Victor 4.43 - Duel
Added 2023-03-26 13:37:34 +0000 UTCHope you enjoy it. See my note at the end, so I don't spoiler up here :)
-Plum
Victor sat on the couch in the parlor where Blueâs staff had directed him, and he watched Tes quietly as she helped Valla prepare for the duel that was due to start in the next few minutes. Valla stood, back straight, eyes closed, Midnight held before her with itsâherâpoint resting on the carpet. She wore one of her legion uniform shirts, the ones she usually wore under her half-coat uniform blazers. The shirt was white, perfectly form-fitting, with a high collar and not a single wrinkle to be seen. Her black pants were trim, close-fitting, and tucked into knee-high black boots polished to a mirror sheen.
As always, Vallaâs hair was perfectly coiffed, held close to her scalp with silver barrettes. Victor thought she looked exceptionally pretty and vulnerable, and he began to worry in earnest for her safety. Objectively, he knew there was nothing new that should be making him worry more; heâd just seen her standing there, face serene, eyes closed, concentrating on listening to Tes, and some instinct in him wanted to protect her. Still, he wished he were the one getting ready to fight; how hard it was to watch someone else do it for a change!
The announcement had gone out the day before that the duel would be one of weapon skill alone. Each combatant was allowed her chosen tool of battle but no armor. The rules were simple; the first to yield or be struck three blows that drew blood would lose. Should one of those blows prove fatal, that was the nature of combatâthere was always some risk. Tes was confident in Valla, though, and she said sheâd figure out what Blue was up to, why he was sure Reis would win. She hadnât gone into details, but sheâd insisted to Victor and Valla the night before that she was sure she could counter anything they might do to interfere.
âDo you see it? Can you picture how youâre going to strike her? Sheâll be fast, and that sword of hers is meant for dueling, but she doesnât know youâre a Sword Dancer. She doesnât know about Midnight and your epic-level skill. Youâll have a counter for all her strikes, just believe in yourself.â Tes had her hands on Vallaâs shoulders, gently squeezing them and speaking softly into her ear, and Victor knew that if he hadnât been included in her privacy spell, he wouldnât be able to hear what she said.
âIâm ready, Tes.â Valla nodded.
âGood. I want you to take this now; Iâm not sure how things will play out over the next few days, and I donât want to forget.â Tes reached over to her left hand and began to twist a tiny, silvery ring off her pinky. Victor could have sworn her fingers hadnât had any jewelry on them, but there it was. She handed Valla the ring and said, âThe books, scrolls, and tomes I promised you. If you and Victor are successful in your conquest back home, these will help you build a truly remarkable society.â
âTes, I . . .â Valla took the ring, slipped it onto her own pinky, and then turned to hug Tes, putting her head on her shoulder. âThank you.â
âYouâre welcome. Now, focus. Youâre going to be . . .â
âItâs time,â a blue-liveried servant announced, poking his head through the door. âThey want her out front; everyoneâs gathered on the carriage lane.â
âWeâll be right behind you, Valla,â Tes said.
âKick her ass,â Victor added, standing up. He walked over to Valla and, because heâd always appreciated simple gestures before a fight, he held out his fist and grinned as Valla bumped his knuckles with hers.
âThis way,â the servant badgered.
âRight. See you soon,â Valla said, offering Victor a bright smile. As he nodded his encouragement, she hefted Midnight Hope, resting the dark star-speckled blade on her shoulder, and followed the servant out the door.
âI have something for you as well, Victor,â Tes said.
âHuh? You already gave me my armor; itâs enough. Câmon, this day is about Valla.â
âThereâs likely to be a bit of an upheaval around here when Valla wins, Victor. Let me give you this; Iâve been holding it for a while.â Tes held out her hand, and a gallon-sized jar appeared in it. It was dark, and Victor thought the glass was tinted, but then he realized the contents were black, and the jar was full to the brim, the contents held in place by a rune-etched, silvery lid.
âWhat is it?â he asked, reaching out to receive the gift. As Tes set the jar in his hands, he felt itâdeep, powerful Energy and a taste of something familiar, a lick of Energy that sang to his fear attunement.
âThis is night brute princeâs heart. Take it, Victor; hold onto it until youâve gained more strength; eat your ancient wyrm heart before consuming this one.â
âOh shit,â Victor said, hefting the jar, savoring the depth of its power. âI didnât know you got this . . .â
âI wasnât sure Iâd give it to you back then. Now I am. Come, put that away, and letâs go watch our friend.â Tes turned and walked out the door, and Victor followed after her after tucking the heart away with his others. Theyâd only walked a few yards down the hallway when Tes paused, though, and Victor saw her sniffing the air. She said, âI donât like the energy in the air, Victor. Something is afoot, perhaps more than I bargained for. Should we grow separated, do you know where to find Boaeghâs tower?â
âNo, you never told us . . .â
âRight,â Tes sighed, shaking her head. âItâs near the southwestern corner of the city. An open-air bazaar borders it on one side and a large abattoir on the other. Itâs squat, only three stories high, with yellow pennants hanging from the grasping claws of ugly, pot-bellied stone gargoyles. Youâll find it easily. Should the time arise when you must flee this city, tell Geomancer Hark that his debt will be wiped clean if he opens the portal for you.â
âDebt? I thought he was happy to help . . .â
âNot now, Victor. Do you understand my directions?â
âYeah, I get it.â
âGood, letâs make haste now.â Tes continued down the corridor, and Victor, somewhat at a loss, followed her.
Blueâs place was a little different in the early morning hours than during a nighttime party. Still, everything was still blue, and Victor found himself starting to hate the color as he associated it with the smug war captain. âNah, thatâs not right,â he grunted, contemplating Valla and her pale blue skin. He liked the color just fine; it was the asshole that had to put so much of it everywhere that he didnât like.
When they stepped outside the front door, a crowd confronted them; hundreds of Vesh nobles were present to watch the spectacle, all gathered on the big, curving, cobbled drive that ran in a loop at the front of Blueâs estate. In the center of the loop, as though built for just such an event, was a circular patch of grass about twenty yards in diameter. Valla stood to the right side of the circle of grass, and her opponent, Reis, stood on the other.
Reis was six inches or so taller than Valla, and she held her glittering, black-scaled wings partially open, making her seem like more than a match for Valla; her physical presence was formidable compared to the neat, lithe figure Valla cut, once again leaning on the pommel of Midnight, the glittering, dark bladeâs point in the grass. Reis, by comparison, whipped her long, flickering red rapier left and right, the weapon hissing through the air, leaving a trail of glittering sparks in its wake.
Vallaâs challenger wore a silky black jumper that clung to the pale flesh of her torso and legs while leaving her slender, muscular arms free. Sheâd painted her face with sharp, contrasting lines of black and white makeup that reminded Victor of images heâd seen of ancient Celtic warriors. Tes grasped his wrist and pulled him close to the circle, effortlessly pushing past much larger Vesh, who seemed suddenly eager to move out of her way as she lightly touched their shoulders. When they took a position at the edge of the circle of grass, Tes frowned and said, âSomething feels off.â
âWhat?â Victor asked, suddenly quite concerned. Tes held up her hand, though, frowning as she concentrated.
âHere we are!â Blueâs voice boomed out from the far side of the ring. He stepped forward onto the grass, and Victor saw that heâd dressed to impress in a fine blue suit, complete with an absurd-looking tophat designed to allow his black horns to poke through the brim. Still, Blue looked like he was rather impressed with himself and his style, and he turned and bowed at the waist so deeply that his fingers brushed the grass in a flourish. The object of his obeisance was the warlord who stood on the edge of the grass almost directly opposite Tes. âThank you for attending this little affair, Warlord. You grace my estate with your presence.â
âBy all means, War Captain Blue. How could I not attend when the Lady Tes foresaw such a thing?â
Tesâs gaze had gone distant, but she refocused on reality at the mention of her name. She nodded to the warlord coquettishly and performed a slight curtsy, lifting her pale red skirts. Blue chuckled and cleared his throat, âWonderful. We have quite a spectacle in store today! For anyone who lives with their head in the sands of the waste and doesnât know the stakesâLady Reis has put up five Coloss Prize Tokens, and Captain Valla has agreed to indenture herself to me, Blue, for a year, should she lose.â Victor didnât appreciate the way Blue sneered when he said, âcaptain.â
âThree blood strikes or a yield is what weâre looking for. No armor or magical devices are allowed. Healing potions will signal your intent to yield. No one outside the match may interfere. Does anyone have a question or objection?â Blue spoke in a booming voice and looked around the circle, and when his eyes fell on Victor, he tilted his long, black horns toward him and grinned, exposing bright, white canines. Victor felt the heat in his Core begin to fan to life as that taunting expression stirred his rage. He frowned, though, crossing his arms over his chest, and simply stared. It was Blue who looked away first.
âIâll take this silence as a sign that weâre all ready for things to begin!â Blue howled, and it was true; the crowd was so quiet that Victor could hear their hushed breaths of anticipation. At Blueâs declaration, though, some scattered applause and a few hoots broke out, and the war captainâs smile widened. He stepped back to the edge of the circle of grass and said, âLadies, you may commence.â
Valla glided onto the grass, Midnight held in a high, aggressive guard, and Reis stepped forward lightly, circling Valla, exceptionally light on her feet. Victor nodded, confident as he watched Valla move; she was a dancer, a gymnast, a woman of exceptional skill with that sword, and it showedâanyone whoâd done any fighting or made a practice of watching others do so would know that she outclassed Reis.
As they circled each other, though, Victor was surprised not to see confident determination on Vallaâs face. She didnât have that ready, severe expression she always wore when they sparred. Her eyes were wide, and lines of stress were evident on her brow. âSomethingâs wrong,â he growled.
âYes,â Tes said, but she reached out a hand to grasp his wrist, and it felt like a band of iron, reminding him of the time sheâd restrained him at Blueâs dinner. Victor didnât have time to object before the first explosive interchange between the two duelists rang through the yard. Reis darted forward, lifting slightly off the ground as she clapped her wings, and she feinted and jabbed with her rapier in a series of rapid blows. Valla batted them aside, dodging like a feather before a breeze, sliding over the grass, and when they parted, not one of Reisâs blows had landed.
Reis frowned, growling and circling, and Valla did the same. Victor knew Valla, knew sheâd be taking Reisâs measure, deciding how best to slip her guard and land a blow, but when he looked at her, his heart began to hammer in his chest. Vallaâs pale skin had lost a shade of blue, and a sheen of sweat stood out on her forehead and cheeks; her breaths looked ragged and forced. Again Victor growled, âSomethingâs fucking wrong, Tes.â
In response, Tes squeezed his wrist, but he saw that her eyes were closed and her brow was drawn sharply down; she was concentrating on something. At the sound of another clash of metal on metal, Victor jerked his gaze back to the duel and saw the two women exchange a flurry of blows and parries, and to his eye, one well-experienced watching Valla, she looked sluggish. When the two women parted, this time, a red bloom of blood was spreading on Vallaâs white shirt, just above her left breast.
âOne for the Lady Reis!â Blue crowed.
Valla, no longer a picture of perfect grace, tried to circle Reis, but her legs looked leaden, and her breaths were coming in ragged gasps, her face sheeting with sweat. Victor took in a breath, ready to roar a protest, but again, Tes squeezed his wrist, and this time she muttered, âOne moment, Victor. I almost have it.â
Victor jerked his gaze back to the fight in time to see Reis dart forward, quick and nimble, and then Valla gasped in pain as that bright, sparking rapier tore through the air and pierced the top of her thigh. Reis barked a savage, short laugh and backpedaled long before Valla could sluggishly cleave downward with Midnight.
âTwo for Reis!â Blue announced, lifting his arms, signaling the crowd to cheer. Most of them did, but Victor wasnât the only one who could see something was wrong. Some muttering sounded among the observers, and Blue frowned. Victor could see he was debating whether he should exhort them to silence after heâd just encouraged them to cheer.
Suddenly Tes released Victorâs wrist, and she strode into the circle. Her voice rang out, âA moment, dear War Captain Blue. I fear thereâs been a mistake.â Valla stood to Tesâs left and leaned forward, resting her hands on her legsâthe front of her white shirt was entirely red now, and Victor knew her leg was bleeding just as severely.
Reis danced from side to side on the other side of Tes and shrieked with blood lust, âWhatâs this? Forfeit!â
âWhat is this, indeed, Lady Tes? Do you seek to intervene for your young companion?â Blue asked, stepping into the circle. âWarlord, donât you think this is grounds for forfeiture?â
âPerhaps so. Whatâs the matter, Lady Tes?â The warlord kept his position on the edge of the circle, a look of slight amusement in his eyes.
âOh, I think when you see the issue, you might agree to allow Captain Valla to continue with the duel. Here, observe, Warlord and War Captain.â This time it was Tesâs turn to sneer as she said title. She held her hand out over the center of the grassy circle, and with a slight rumble and the squelch of damp soil and grass, a long, rune-carved, circular rod of stone lifted from the ground.
âIsnât this strange?â she asked, a savage grin on her face. She lifted the yard-long stone rod and held it over her head. âCan you feel it now?â She strode forward, closer to the warlord and war captain, holding the stone rod over her head as though it were a broomstick. âHow odd to find a siphoning stone here, one meant to drain way air and earth attuned Energies. Why, what a strange coincidenceâthe very affinities within Captain Vallaâs Core.â
âWhatâs this?â the Warlord asked, staring pointedly at Blue.
âI have no idea! A scandal! Lady Tes, did you place that there to discredit me?â
Tes snorted, and suddenly the rod winked out of existence, presumably sent into one of Tesâs storage devices. Valla immediately sighed with relief and began to breathe more regularly. âOh no, War Captain. I wouldnât do such a thing, and the Warlord knows it. Itâs no matter, though. Iâm sure Captain Valla will understand that this must be a mistake or an act of sabotage by some disgruntled lackey of yours. Give her a moment to catch her wind, and sheâll continue the duel.â
âNonsense,â the warlord said, âSurely we should reschedule; the captain has two wounds already.â
âIâll be fine,â Valla said, taking slow, steady breaths through her nose and out through her mouth, still leaning on her knees.
The crowd had gone quiet at first when Tes pulled the rod from the damp soil, but now people were muttering and cursing, and the loud buzz of conversations began to make it difficult to hear everyone speaking other than Tes. A tall, lanky woman with golden scales on her arms and forehead shouted, âShe should get a healing draught!â
âWhat?â Reis howled. âI didnât know about that rod! I scored my blows with fair skill!â
Tes held up her hand and turned in a slow circle, making eye contact with many people in the crowd. Slowly the buzz of outrage diminished, and when things were quiet again, she looked to Valla and said, âWell, Captain? Do you require healing?â
âNo.â Valla stood and whipped Midnight in a complicated pattern, and her blade sang in the air. âLetâs finish this.â
âIâm of the opinion that Reis should have to forfeit,â the warlord said. He looked long and hard at Blue, and Victor saw something pass between them as though Blue were outraged. Had the warlord been in on this scam of a fight? Was he throwing Blue under the bus, so to speak? Perhaps even the warlord was worried about public perception. He turned away from Blue to Valla and said, âAre you certain you wish to continue? I will award you the prize right now if you wish.â
âIâm sure,â Valla growled, her eyes locked on Reisâs face. The crowd cheered, and Victor felt a hot lance of pride in his chest. In his mind, at that moment, Valla was truly amazingâbeautiful and brave with an undauntable spirit.
Tes backed out of the circle and said, âYou heard her. Restart the fight at your discretion, dear Blue.â
As Valla and Reis squared off again, Blue bellowed, âBegin!â The crowd fell silent again, and then Valla charged. Reis tried to meet her head-on, but Valla was back to her usual, graceful, brilliant self. She slapped Reisâs rapier aside, and in a combination that was difficult to track, Victor saw her work Midnight in a series of feints, slashes, and thrusts. Reis valiantly whipped her blade in response, trying to parry, dodge and duck Vallaâs quick blows.
As Victor struggled to track the sword strokes, a scream cut through the clash of metal, and when Valla backed away from Reis, the tall, black-clad woman fell to the grass, writhing in agony, one of her glittering, scaled wings twitching in the grass, severed from her body. âI yield!â the woman moaned, desperately scrabbling at the grass as she fumbled a healing draught sheâd summoned from a storage container.
Was there much tension, or did you all know things would be fine? Was it entertaining? Should I do something more shocking . . . (evil grin)
Anyway, looking forward to your opinions.
Plum
Comments
I felt the tension, because Tess is limited in her actions due to oaths etc. I could see Valla losing and the next plot point being how to get her out of servitude. I would have liked to see it drawn out a hair more, particularly once Valla starts to own the other lady. Not like I want Valla to change how she acts to quickly end thingsâ sheâs a proâ more just a bit more description
Mack
2023-03-27 11:58:46 +0000 UTCIt was pretty tense. I wasn't worried about Valla, ultimately, but I wasn't sure whether or not the group would end up fighting in a all-out brawl with everyone or if she'd win the duel. That was pretty cool.
Eifer
2023-03-27 07:06:53 +0000 UTC